All Comments on 'The Contrast Ch. 03'

please get an editor. please also tell me that i'm not the only one to notice this.

I like this story, but really does need an editor.

These stories do have some merit and are rather enjoyable once you have a chance to rework each sentence. An editor would be a lovely idea to help you, the author out. So far I respect the effort you put into your stories. Good luck and Cheers!