by NewOldGuy77
The Tr2 is not my favorite, but I am enjoying this entire series. I can't wait for the next episode. I guess Landon will be the next one to find true love due to the Triumph.
A Winchester 101 is an over/under configuration. They were made in Japan by Miroku Firearms Mfg. Though not the most favored of the time they were a well made and 'pretty' shotgun. If the gun in question was really a pump, it was most likely a Model 12 or a newer model 1200. Just FYI, not a complaint about this otherwise entertaining story.
Wonderful story! You have come a long way as a writer since “Blue Ridge Romance”. This one was a real master piece written very believably from the woman’s perspective with good dialogue, good character development with a smooth flow and fast paced. Easy read drawing the reader into the here and now of the story.
Uncle Nelson’s talk with Rose was a master stroke that allowed the happy ever after ending and all because Big Ben developed a hoof problem! You are good, my friend.
There are so many BTB stories on this site it was refreshing to read a BTP (Burn The Prick) even as a sub plot along with the conniving daughter and back stabbing sister and friends.
This story deserves a 4.8+ rating and gets a solid 5 stars from me. Looking forward to the next Convertible fantasy.
Enjoy the Central Coast! Miss Pismo but enjoy being close to my 4 Grand Kids more.
Life is good!
Cheers
SAGE
I have really enjoyed this series to date and this one is no exception. Always waiting
for the next instalment and haven't been disappointed yet. Keep up the good work.
but not the best of this series. Of course, maybe you just set the bar so high.
In the other stories, the car figured more prominently and served as a hook, or link between characters. This time, not so much.
I was so happy to read your newest story and so disapointed i nearly skiped reading.
Your writing as good as always but the story dont put it for me. To point a gun to somebody especially your sibling really bad taste. And the TR gets half a sentence.
It has been every story without it. So get back to the first 6 parts and try again. This is a sidekick at most.
What an abrasive, vindictive woman! Rose seemed to enjoy feeling wronged just so she would be justified in hurting her enemies. She relished avenging with abandon.
“Rose is mean”?
That’s the point! Dude, the description literally says “Rose has anger issues.”
The story was good and interesting characters. It feels a bit out of place in the series. Not enough of the story is driven by the car.
Well written as always! I kinda don't like Rose though, lol. Probably would like her more if we weren't seeing her at her worst. It's nice that Russ is so empathetic and kind and persistent. She's quite lucky.
Rose is a great character, she is resilient and I loved her inner monologue. The plot was a bit more complicated than it needed to be but I enjoyed it nonetheless.