All Comments on 'The Convertible - Time of My Life'

Nice story well told for it’s complexity. Not quite up to par with the other two convertible stories but I enjoyed it. It seemed Alejandro was sort of forced being the bad guy. Don’t know if that makes since. I try not to criticize stories if I don’t like them I don’t read them and move on. It’s your fantasy and told your way. If I start suggesting my ideas as many do then the result would be my fantasy and I certainly don’t have the talent or writing skills you do.

Thanks for sharing

SAGE

While not as good as the first two this was still a good story to read and well worth 5 stars.

Dear Readers, I wrote this story with Filipina characters as heroines because if you look at the 'Filipina' tag in Literotica, they are mostly represented as sexualized maids or hookers. I consulted with RiverMaya while writing it to represent the culture accurately, and to make sure my Filipinas were presented with the love and respect they deserved.

Great story and I like reading it from the female POV. I in fact love this edition over the previous as even though this is fantasy. I find it hard to suspend belief when Jacob encounters his brothers ex and though she had a history of being stone cold bitch and he in fact thoroughly disliked and even hated her. Yet Even with her change of heart he fell in love and wanted to marry her in 2 weeks. While these elements are here as well atleast with Arachella and Jeremy there was a mutual and physical attraction present between each other for years that was never quite acted on until they met again at the Mountain Lake Lodge. Speaking of the lodge I stayed with my fam there a few years back and it was one of the most relaxing and pleasant vacation I ever had. At the time the lake was dry which in itself has a peculiar phenomenon where it naturally empties and refill itself over the years. I know now that the water in the lake is now on the rise. So maybe after this pandemic scare we will make a return trip.

All of the Convertible stories are good fun, but this ranks up there at the top of the list. There are some lines the author just throws out that had me giggling, requiring me to stop reading and just enjoy. That's a high complement.

Thanks

Ballroom dancing is the best way to meet a husband! That's what I did =]. I loved Tia and Nicholas.

The only downside was Alexandra who didn't really come over as a complete idiot. The drama of him turning up at the resort after a 5 hour drive was a little fanciful given his desire for fan6tast baseball or whatever it was and having screwed a fellow officer.

Otherwise a neat and delightful story.

Nice story