by JugheadJane
This female author likes anal. I, a male reader, find this very erotic. More anal, please!
This is really quite well written. The plot is a bit too melodramatic, but that's always a problem for beginners. Your ability to describe people, their thoughts and emotions, and their actions is good enough that you don't need bank robberies or amazing coincidences to hang your story on. Trust your abilities and give us more of your interesting characters and their interesting relationships.