All Comments on 'The Corset Shop'

To be erotic. In any way, shape or form. Just wasn't convincing.

LostinloveLostinyou, I disagree with the above anonymous comment, but to each his/her own.

As you've demonstrated, you don't need to describe cum dripping from a face, or how one is slamming into another to have an erotic story. For many, in real life, it's the tease, the promise of things to come, the anticipation of a pleasure that may happen.

I hope there's another part/continuation of this story. If not, we'll let our imaginations run wild with the possibilities of what may happen next, as you wrote in your closing.

There is another part awaiting approval from the moderators hope you like it. This is my first story so thank you for reading.

I found it a pleasure to read, and I'm sure lots of others will too. Try not to take too much notice of put-downs, and please keep writing and sharing with us. And always remember: you cannot please everyone.

Nicely done, thank you, and please have four stars from me.