All Comments on 'The Cost of Memories'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
It's good

It's good, but it is much much much too short.

toy4LadyandDontoy4LadyandDonalmost 5 years ago
Agree

I agree with anon......much to short. We need more

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
World Building

I was thinking that this story could be the start of some incredible world building.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Agreed

You could use this to create an entire future world in which to set a variety of stories.

SapphoLustSapphoLustover 4 years ago
Many ways to take this story and a fantastic start

Great dialog!!!

Would like to have seen some resolution (with details) after the love making that showed how memories were recorded and more on the emotional disparity between the two characters.

MigbirdMigbirdabout 2 years ago

Painfully beautiful. No need for more — said enough. Of course this comment is way late, so you and I agree (?). 5 stars.

AYuriLoverAYuriLover2 months ago

This is wholesome.

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