by macktosh
I was thinking that this story could be the start of some incredible world building.
You could use this to create an entire future world in which to set a variety of stories.
Great dialog!!!
Would like to have seen some resolution (with details) after the love making that showed how memories were recorded and more on the emotional disparity between the two characters.
Painfully beautiful. No need for more — said enough. Of course this comment is way late, so you and I agree (?). 5 stars.