All Comments on 'The Couch'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Enjoyed it

Loved the anticipation building

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
EXCELLENT!

LOVED this story! I hope you plan on adding part II to this one!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Great start...

to what has to be a fantastic, much longer story. I look forward to reading it.

sharkandpensharkandpenover 15 years ago
good start

I thought this was a great start. I think what I liked about it is that it left me wondering..what's his name? why are they alone? Where is their circle of friends? Is this a date? What movie are they watching? This story literally said nothing about the characters, except that they were acquaintances and watching a movie and something about him liking animals. But it worked.

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