by TheGraduate88
Very enjoyable, especially as I love the Mrs Robinson genre. Definitely more please, you’ve set it up perfectly and I’d like to see this couple get really dirty.
great buildup to a super climax, keep it going, nice to see a guy that knows what he is doing and not having to rely on just a 12 inch cock.
It was a bit on the slow side, too much build up and not enough action, she could have shaved her pussy for you but you will get better as you write.
A delightful tale of self control, anticipation and erotic love. Very well written, Thank you.
A great beginning. Please continue this story; I can't wait to see how her two children react to him. My first thought was that she had two sons, but two daughters would make for a more interesting story. They would be more "age appropriate" than their mother.
My life was similar. My late wife was 38 with a 17 year old daughter, and I was 28. Not quite the same as your story's characters, so I'm not seeing myself in your story, just interested enough to see where you take it.
Can’t wait for more. The tease was sensational followed by smoking hot sex
Not speaking from personal experience....just opinion....I found this tale to be like a breath of fresh spring air !!! I liked that the GUY was super sharp, highly intuitive, & VERY "into" the lady (kinda'total immersion thing) BEFORE the typical trip to the bedroom. I further liked that SHE was a more "modest", _everyday_ person, flaws & all, & NOT one of the commonly found statuesque, , easy to bed, volcanic semi models from other stories. I liked HIS " approach' to the whole situation... slow & easy...not a grand Prix race to sex. In this respect, it DOES duplicate MY whole persona & procedure.., WELL DONE !!
Very well written - such a comfortable flow with that explosion at the end
Awesome story! Sounds so similar to a tryst I've been in with a cougar. The entire story made me think of her!! Good job and thanks for taking your time with it!
Same stories over and over. You need new story lines and details, details, details.
You have the talent, you can do better.
Not too bad as stories go, but expecting a story about an older woman latching onto a younger man but not getting it made it a complete flop for me.
Why YES. Please continue. Great story and plot. Wonderful read, Looking forward to more chapters.
I thought the sexual description was at times too clinical, ie the pink clitoris under its hood. Altogether , I enjoyed your writing style.
A thoroughly engaging story! We done. Your character development is particularly captivating. You could take this story line in a number of fascinating directions. Thanks for the time and effort reflected here.