All Comments on 'The Council Ch. 08'

Go 'head Ash! Claim your man and don't take NO for an answer! I agree with you--sometimes talking is overrated. Their mating was touching and beatiful, not to mention HOT.

Oh, and thank you, most excellent Jaz, for giving us a brief look at my favorite couple, Loretta and Andrei--yes, they've now beat out, just slightly, Cedar and Alexei. But this could change at any moment.

Great chapter, Jaz. Uh, when's the next one coming???? What? You already know I'm greedy!

Yet again I am delighted to see a new chapter posted...Love the series and the people in them.. Keep up the great work Jaz, Cant wait for the next installment already!!!

to see what happens at the meeting. :) And glad to see Nors and Ashleigh together, of course.

This is getting better and better. Please hurry with the next chapter.

great chapter... 3 wolves have vampire mates awesome. Can't wait to see how it all plays out. Hurry up with the next chapter

Awesome chapter as always - I am very nervous about the meeting. I love all the characters - you make them seem so real that I feel they are actual friends. You know I adore your talent - I am just amazed that it gets better and better with every chapter you write.

hugs, Kate

I was so turned on by Ashleigh & Nors lovemaking, I had to take a break and breathe! lol Wow Jaz very erotic, sensual, & endearing to read~ they're the best couple to me in this series. You keep me enthralled with the world and stories that you spin. Thank you and I'm patiently waiting for more~

Til next time,

Zee~

Go Ash! Getting her Nors. Well written, as always. Excellent pace and everything. :D

That's all I've got!

oh and thanks for adding me in you bio..... :)

Have two chapters a week?? Or three chapters every two weeks??

Just back after long class sessions to find another chapter waiting for me. How wonderful. The scene between Nors and Ashleigh was just breath taking, you have such an enormous talent for painting beautiful and vivid images. Now if only I could figure out a way of adding it onto my classes' reading list for English Lit! :)

Stunning is the only word that comes to mind - the best yet, but am sure the brothers grim can top it!

Keep it coming baby!

Love it but need more soon please.

Early chapter! Do we still get a thursday one? (Feel free to virtually smack me for being so greedy!) Great chapter, as always. Looking forward to the next.

once again brilliant, ashleigh and nors scene was better than what i had hoped for . brilliant story telling , cant wait for another week. thanks a lot

All I can say is to short! It was wonderful,awesome,fantastic and many other words I can think of and I can't wait for more!

Loveeeeeeeeeeeeed this chapter, can't wait to read more hon, keep up the excellent work.

Donna

Who knew that "you are my asshole" could be a term of endearment? LMAO! Those twins and their feisty mates crack me up!

I love Ash and Nors together! You made them really stand out against the rest of the more aggressively paced matings. Their constant close proximity to each other for such a long time really seems to have slowly built a deep bond between these two. Every single mated pair has their very own unique qualities that set them apart from the others. It is becoming very difficult to pick a favorite. I'm not sure about the Weres=3, Vamps=0 score either, cause when it is this good, everyone's a winner! hahaha! Great chapter!

well you know, and ash and nors, seem to be a quiet pair, yet when it comes down to the eventual line in the sand, and we know its coming, they are the two along with rafe and lacy, because we all know he owes the three vamps, and is a very loyal wolf, that i would fear, the twins and their mates are feral, action then think, nors and ash, along with rafe and lacy are the opposite, think then act, which i love

to borrow a phrase from a tv show, i pity the fool who gets this bunch's dander up, from the the twins who are explosive and emotional , to nors and ash who seem to be cerebral and calm, they are all deadly ( and i still have to think the wolf bites have done something,and it aint going to be good for the vamp community

Catman71: "i still have to think the wolf bites have done something,and it aint going to be good for the vamp community"<br />

Define "good". Personally I think the vampire community is not healthy and that this change, while not a change they want, may be very good for them. Possibly the community really at threat is the were community. If everyone starts mating with the walking dead, (MRSGREN, think about it...) then the were community risks fading away. Lets hope this anomaly remains at the controlled and limited levels it is at now so that both communities can benefit.<br />

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-ShadowedDreams<br />

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(Yes, vampires can turn a human into a vampire. Viruses will hijack a cell and re-write the control code for the protein factories to make more of them, they are not considered to be able to reproduce. This is also the parallel to the vampire model, they don't reproduce, they infect. So as vampires don't meet all the requirements for being alive, they must by definition be the walking dead.)

Amazing!! I'm so excited to see how all this is going to work out! I almost didn't see this chapter and scares me lol. Thats how addicted I am to it. Weres-3 vamps-0 lol I like it! Mostly coz its turning out so well. Bring on the drama =D

Ash and Nors are done !!! Wooo hoooo!! And so terribly hot!!! It was so hot that it took me this long to comment. You know that I'm just going to demand MORE!!!!

I'm so anxious to read the next chapter that I seem to be losing track of time, I keep checking for it at what feels like daily intervals but in reality is only every couple of hours. With each passing chapter your world is engraved into my thoughts and heart, and with each update I release a sigh of relief in your continuation of their (your characters) stories. I am looking forward to whatever dramatic (and I'm sure romantic) surprise your storyline has in store for us.

Your eternal groupie...Zooey

P.S. did you notice...I've only used the word brilliant once in this comment (well now twice-but can you really count this time?). The keys on my keyboard are practically worn out from overuse commenting you. :)

I cannot wait for your next chapter, it is nice that you post farely quickly :O) The characters you've created just keep the reader wanting more. Of course the were bites have done something, otherwise it wouldn't have been included so much in the story, lol. I'm hoping that they will allow the vamps to bite their wolves back!!!

Ok Jaz!!! I thought we had an understanding Miss Missy!!!! Why do you insist upon making my blood pressure go up to alarming rates!!!!! I aught to stop reading the chapters but I AINT QUITIN' YOU!!!!!! Ashleigh and Nors!!! REALLY!!! WOOOOOW!!!! Just hurry up with the next chapter!! HHIC

As always another amazingly filling chapter. Yet it keeps me coming back for more like a coffee fiend. Looking forward to the other chapters when you get back from your vacay. Have fun and thank you again for always having the great ability to keep us all in suspense!!!!!!!

is it just me or was there a whole bit of how loretta and andre getting together? last we heard he was still angry at his brother for letting a wolf bite him?

please write fast. :)

I think you may have missed chapter 6 from the sounds of things Anom :-)

Very very very HHHOOOTTT...thanks (ppt)

Another enjoyable chapter. I love the contrast in Nors' personality...he's so big and when we first met him came off like this silent giant. I love how underneath it all he was a bit unsure with Ashley. It was so sweet that he wanted to make sure 'she knew what she was getting into.' The twins' antics with their mates are fun. I hope to see some serious stuff between them....will there be any danger from the counsel?

I was most excited by the ending where the Beta mtg. is coming and we know we'll see Rafe and Aaron again! Jen is pregnant...how great. I'm sure the boys' reactions are gonna be great. Looking forward to seeing the old favs.

It was nice to see Ash and Nors take it nice and slow. It was more like what I think first love should be like. Don't get me wrong, I enjoy reading the quick hard pounding sex scenes between the twins and the girls, but that just doesn't seem right for Ash and Nors. Can't wait to see what happens at the "Pack" and "Council" meetings.

You have such a great way to portray the characters in your world. It really makes me feel a part of every scene.

Ashleigh & Nors-that was so amazingly hot. And now I'm on pins and needles to see what happens with the pack meeting.

What a lovely chapter hun. Am really liking the whole Nors and Ashleigh I think they're my favorite :)

And now I reckon prepare for the shit to hit the fan lol oh boy Caleb is so gonna hit the roof lol.

I am very much in the feeling today of sit back relax and watch the fireworks and I can't wait for em :) Are we getting enar Guy Fawkes night yet lol :)

so cute! I love Andrei :)

You blow me away with your ability to suck me right in to each and every chapter. It feels like the chapter just flys by.

Thank you for putting Nors out of his misery. I just keep wanting to give him a hug and say 'don't worry you'll get some' and good job with Ashleigh looks like she's going to be a bit of a freak. Then again she is a wolf which should help make up for a year of waiting.

the defense has a way of coming back to change the outcome. TK U MLJ LV NV

So happy you put Nors out of his misery I felt so bad for him. And I'm sure Ashleigh will make up for his misery lol. I like Nors he seems so sweet. I hope everything works out for the new mates

I really love reading series of stories with the same characters in them and this set of stories is brilliant.

If these were available at the shop i would buy them - they are that good.

I agree with Daireto. This is the first Vampire Wolf story/series I have read and I have trouble putting it down to get other things done.

My only complaint is I can't give it the ten stars it really deserves for each chapter.

Nors and Ashleigh are my favorite couple in this story.

you are one of my favs on here i just love the story its my 3rd time reading it !!!!please continue writing the rest of it ... im talking bout kothi and daria !

Good story, but I had to give you a low rating for your constant use of the word "drugging" in reference to a kiss, saying a guys "body" got hard, when It's clearly his DICK that got hard and poor punctuation.

P.S. I know this isn't a published story. But I'm still holding it to the same standards.

I had to go back and try to find every mention of Nors hoping to find a physical description of him. I found tall, very wide chested, red hair long enough to tie back at his neck. Ashleigh considers him beautiful. I can't get past my mental picture of him as middle aged and more plain looking. I know that most all vampires seem to be beautiful but I am having a hard time putting a beautiful face on Nors. That with the fact that I assumed that Ashleigh was probably 13 or 14 years old when her family died. Their first time together was sooo hot I had a hard time processing it. I usually dont have this problem when reading a story but I thought I would mention it wondering if it were just me or what. Other than that, we are having a terribly cold winter right now and I am loving reading this wonderful story all wrapped up in a warm comfy blanket!

You are very bad writer, i m small business man having independency in timing of work, i had spent last 48 hours reading your stories, taking break only for foods and neccecitis.

Excellent plot, great characters... You are simply amazing....