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I liked it. A few too many references to "little girl sounds" for my taste but overall a good piece. The pacing works. The only problem I had with it is the premise that nerdiness somehow equals asexual. If anyone in this time thinks "nerds don't understand sex" they're not paying attention at all. That's not meant as a dig on your story telling, just a point that your characters may be a little caricaturish but it's not so bad to detract from the story significantly. Thanks for sharing.

Verry. Good. Peter.lowe. Skype. 561. /. Surrey / england. /. Age. 65

What a cool story, the storyline and characters were great and with the families joining together it could make some interesting stories. Maybe a continuation where Jonah and Lois get married and move into together and then having the twins sharing Lester. What a fuckfest that would be. Well done 5+++stars

Too juvenile to read past the obligatory huge need dick.

Skimmed the rest, I suppose some will like it.

☆☆☆

Mum got the son, only fair the dad should get the daughters

In many ways, I wish I was Lester for those sexual experiences.

And then Jonas’s female coworker walks in, and then his boss walks in, and then the governor walks in…Just kidding! 5 stars!

Good story, although another chapter for the ending would have been great.