All Comments on 'The COVID Experiment'

As some of my readers know, I took a lengthy hiatus from writing to focus on my family and work. Well COVID has given me some free time again to refocus on writing, so I'm posting some of the stories I've been working on while sheltering in place. This is the first one, as a natural evolution from quarantine.

I'm also posting my stories on Hentai-Foundry and I'm opening a Subscribestar account. My stories will always be free to read on here and Hentai-Foundry, I'll just be posting them to Subscribe 1 month earlier.

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I hope everyone enjoys this story, I'll be posting more soon. Yes, I want to get back to writing Make a Wish, but in the meantime I've written 13 chapters, over 50k words, on another Genie story that is a fanfic of the Summertime Saga video game. I'll start posting that here soon but it's already up on Hentai-Foundry at this time.

Its fantastic Well done

I liked it. The only part I didn't like is her name changed from Rebecca to Elizabeth at one point. Other than that it was a good read.

Decent story tho i have to say what was the deal with the mothers name going from rebecca, to elizabeth halfway thru.

Sorry, I didn't even realize I changed the name halfway through! I'll get that fixed everyone, sorry about that!

This was a great story and a part 2 would be awesome to have.

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Waiting for part 2

Come on....you know you wanna bring the sister back home and include her in the festivities....

Very hot story, very horrible writing/editing.....Hence, the four stars instead of five... probably should’ve been three stars because of all the misdirected grammarical mistakes, but it was a Very hot story! Keep up the good work, and get somebody to help you proofread before publishing and you will go far!

hope you keep this going~~

I totally admit that my stories sometimes struggle with grammar and editing. I tend to just write, and I don't do nearly as much proofreading or correcting as I should. It's a bad habit I'm trying to correct, so constructive feedback about that is always welcome. However, in providing that feedback, your comment itself shouldn't also be a grammatical/spelling train wreck. This story is 15k words and it's hard for me to take people seriously (when criticizing my grammar/spelling/editing) who can't even cleanly compose a 50-word comment.

I absolutely loved the story. The twist at the end really got me good! I especially liked how you modeled the mom after Ava Addams as that gave me a visual reference while I read the story. If you'd like help proofreading your next chapter/story, I'd be glad to help. Send me an email. I hope you do a followup chapter when the sister comes home as that could make for an interesting read. Five stars and a favorite point!

I absolutely loved the story. I am looking forward to reading more of your stories. Thank you so much for taking the time to bring these wonderful stories to us!

Good story but I'm a little confused as to why the mother's name was Rebecca at the beginning then was changed to Elizabeth half way through. I suspect you did not proof read this before submitting it.

Very good Story. Is there a second Part?

Really nice story especially after mom came out and admitted she has been wanting the same thing he has. A next chapter with her getting pregnant would be nice. Not sure how you are going to deal with the sister aspect but it will be fun to read I am sure. Looking forward to it. Definitely a 5 rating.

Very good story, well built, and nice to see the conclusion !

This is the first of your stories read. Agree about the proofreading - a bit rushed toward the end but the meaning is clear.

Will be looking at your other work with interest :)

Nice foundation....as Jessie return submissively to the home, she becomes a true submissive cum dumpster eager to please and breed ......

The next story when his sister moves in, should be very very interesting. Can't wait.

Nicely done and well put together. I'm hoping that you'll write at least a second part to the story. Thank you!

Who knew? The COVID pandemic changes people’s names on Day 4. Lol.

Thank you for an incredible story. It's one of the hottest I've read this year.

I really liked this one alot. The twist at the end with mom knowing the whole time was a nice touch. Hope you keep it going with sister moving back home.

Hope you follow up when Sister gets home.

Prove that you can have a great story line combined with hardcore porn.

One of the best momson stories!

Glad to see you posting again, do you plan to continue with Genie Chronicles?

Top story, loved it thank you. So is it possible that he and his sister will get together too and maybe he breeds her as well. This could be a lot of sexy fun for the family.

Great. What a fantasy! Loved it!

Nice idea. But funny.... I could have sworn Mom starts off as Rebecca, before becoming Elizabeth.

The way the sentences are formulated, it just made me read this with a Scottish accent. Maybe I'm wrong, but it's definitely oxford English. Great read!

Would've been a hot way to deal with not being on the pill

Waiting eagerly for the sequel. Nice slow development of the story. Good job.

Hope part 2 Wil be more erotic.

This a hot story. The build up is excellent, the sex is nicely descriptive and the twist at the end was entertaining. I do hope there’s a sequel.

Terrifically hot story with excellent build up. Really like stories where sons and mothers are not just fucking but joined in deeper relationship bond.

I know this is not the kind of story you usually write, but hope you'll consider to do more in these theme in the future!

Wow Can't wait to read the next installment. Great ending leaving us wanting more. Well done

Fucking boomer bitches hoarding all supplies in this pandemic.

Pretty solid story, here's hoping you have a sequel to this on the way, perhaps involving the sister.

Great, great story! Fantastically hot! Now, please do a sequel where the sister joins the party!

This one definitely needs a sequel maybe where the mom and sister enjoy him together

This one was very well done. I hope there is another episode or two.

would love to see more of this story and what happens when the daughter comes home.

Well on a subconscious level I loved it , but on a conscious level I loved it just as much , so I’m thinking , and sub thinking , that it was a well balanced story all the way around , of course my algorithms mathematically concur !

Ummm I'm thinking that one of my slaves has to refer and bring another one in for a try and see if it is a good fit. So Mom needs to makeup with sis and make her so horny for her brother she is dripping in anticipation and then mom can bring her into the fold after she attends to mom's folds in becoming the best pussy eater and promising to be a slut for her brother too, with mom as the Top bitch and sis being the bottom. So then as Mom's belly swells sis get's so hungry that she too wants a baby by her brother; as the family grows as Brother is now a Full time Professor next to his Mentor who also reveals his wife is his Daughter and his sister is his bottom bitch and nanny who has a Daycare for both of their offspring as they finish developing the subliminal programming so boy's can turn their mom's into their sluts and others can make a stable of sluts that recruit others to the stable as he keeps them satisfied by sharing his sluts at a Large swingers club he owns and operates so all their sluts get all the cum and pussy they can handle. Part of that s like my life as I get mine thru repeat and referral, or a few from emails.

Loved this story and hope it continues with the sister joining in the fun!!!

This deserves a chapter 2, with or without the sister moving back in.

I liked the story until it was revealed that his mom was playing mindgames with him about the messaging and denying him going further then deciding she wants to go further. Not to mention every interaction between them was led by the mother. She told him what to do and when and what is allowed and not even in the end. This is more like topping from the bottom, the main character way to passive and 0 assertiveness, which i wouldve liked. Anyways nice story

Bring the sister and breed her as well. Also make the sex more kinky like add some anal play or something but no BDSM stuffs

Love it and would love to read more about them

Fukin excellent story. But now you’re kinda locked into part two with that ending….

Awesome story slow at first and ended nicely, I need to now if the sister moves back home and joined in the fun of COVID-19 lockdown