All Comments on 'The Coward and the Wolf Ch. 02'

loving it......and definetly want more......;p.....

Great chapter, almost no one of the problems I had with the first chapter. The great mumber of adjectives is present, but they are well used and a erotic text eithou them would be dreadful. With at least part of the bigger plot revealed, I'm very inyerested in jnowing ehat are the other tribes,

Only 2 complaints, more sex scenes! Moaaar! And Talia is too poweful, but only for now I hope , or she is evenly matched by the other Goddess (I'm assuming all other five are female too).

You're doing an awesome job so far.

I can't wait for the next chapter. :D

excited about the next chapter can't wait to see the other tribes liking Steve and Talia love to explore the rest of the world you created .be a little more descriptive with the imagery of the characters some are a bit vague than others in all a fabulous story.

"Sure thing, I'll just waltz on out there with my dick hanging out. Fuck no..."

I don't know about any of you folk, but that line made me LoL like a loon.

It's been nine years, obviously the writer gave up on this tory, as so many failed wannabes on this site have done.

It is not the worst premise, and there is some good world building, but good golly, still a ton of bad grammar errors and poor editing. My junior high newspaper was better than this at that aspect. (We didn't write a lot of off-planet erotica back in 8th grade...weird, I know.)

Also, Steve the protagonist?

"The trick was to get the maximum take for your give."

He's basically a dick, and nobody should feel bad for him, no matter what happens. He's kind of funny, and rational in a lot of ways, but very selfish and shallow in many other ways.

If we don't like your main character, it will be hard for us to like the story much.

Don't let the few comments here all saying 'five stars' fool you. Many others just didn't bother to post comments at all.