All Comments on 'The Cowboy and the Schoolgirl'

This is clever and really funny. I enjoyed it.

Different plot, but in the end, they still have sex. Good story.

Not only is this story sexy, but it the language use is extremely creative.

but there are things that don't go with what you're trying to put across

((Paying no attention to the hymen-busted girl's whimpering cries of pain and whining protests,)) from a CAD. That is not "making love"; they're both overwhelmed by LUST. I don't BUY their love; "you're saying it", but it just isn't really there for me.

((To hell with college)); anyone knows that working on ranch requires brains. Since you haven't stated her major we're not sure why she's there, but Agricultural or business pursuits would be advisable. ...DKP

It's so short that I don't see it as Romance which is of a longer duration & would show us more of their history, why we should think of it a Romance.

It was ok butttt.... This really isn't in the right category, nothing about it romantic. It needs to be in either first time or erotic encounters. Oh and just one more thing, next time do some research, I'm country, know hundreds of country folks and farmers of all kinds and none of em act or talk like that

drug store cowboys act like that, not real ones!

I just love Katie and Clint and their lovemaking. Clint is a very sexy guy with the reddish-blond chest hair. Hope they can be happy together and produce Spencer babies!

SIR!

The story was fantastic! Loved it! But even better, a FANTASTIC play on words! A true poet Sir, a true poet!

Thank you!

Great story.... wish it was longer!

P.S. It's a dually truck, not dooley.

You sure do like compound words. Real ones, made up ones, words that should be two words with a space between and everything.