All Comments on 'The Creators Ch. 01'

Can't wait for the next chapter

Very creative story and with humor as well. I look forward to more of the same.

This was so much fun to read! Imaginative and brimming with possibilities. Don't stop on my account!

Really looking forward to more chapters!

No idea who the author is but I remember reading this a long time ago. You've put it up this week.

I assure you it's impossible to plagiarize my own work. I put this up on sexstories.com three years ago, then abandoned the project to finish Queen Yavara. I didn't want to post it here until I was finished with the whole story; that is, all three books. Now the story is done, and I am posting the whole thing on both sites.

for something of this quality to appear,

im enthralled *****

This story is absolutely legendary on other sites. It's the third-most read story ever on xnxx. White Walls, I am so fucking glad youre finally posting this here and that youre finished with the final book!

To all those done with the first chapter, you have no idea how fucking amazing this story is. Read on, because this story is not just one of the best I've ever read on an erotic site. it is one of the best i've ever read period.

No plagarism . That's for sure . No one can write like you . I too have read it before . And am enjoying it again .

Looking forward to where this goes, but it is well written and I don't immediately loath the primary characters...at least so far! Please, keep up the great writing!

I read your entire Queen Yavara series, and I can tell just by chapter one of this story that is going to be as wonderfully fucked up and beautiful as that one. This will be one to be remembered for sure. Keep it up!

You set this story up beautifully. I can't wait to read more.

Better Chapter one then Queen Yavara. Can see you have grown as a writer

I like the story premise, however the jumping around between all four characters and then repeating the same scene of the story is tedious. Four fucking times, I started skipping sections of the story because it was repetitive boredom getting in the way of story progress.

Four published pages all of them padded with repetitive bullshit. So in effect you published one single page of a story built on a pretty good idea.

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