All Comments on 'The Creators Ch. 12'

So first off, your stories are great studies in the nature of power and how it affects people. Second, I don’t think I can read the next part if its darker than this. You are a good writer, so good that I can inhabit the world you weave. If the next one is darker, I don’t think I can take it. This I think is the greatest compliment I can give you. You are so good I have doubts if my heart can match it. I look forward to your other work I guess.

New rule: every single sex scene must be anal. Sad. Moving on.

holeeeee shit you did not just do that, you.crazy fuck. crazy brilliant, but fuckin twisted. white walls, huh? padded with cumstains. goddamn.

I came for the fap but stayed for the story. By now I'm just skipping the sex scenes to get to the story faster. You truly wrote a great work of fiction and it's sad but understandable that society doesn't accept sex in fictional works as it can be used in so many ways for storytelling. Your work is a prime example. Sometimes I feel sad I can't write down the stories like these that form in my mind, as I am nit a great writer, so I treasure finding you very much.