All Comments on 'The Cripple'

Your grammar is so horrible that I have to assume you write in a language other than English, then use a free, online translator.

The writing is so miserable that I can't even give you a place to start working on.

Oh, I'm pretty sure they teach nurses there is no "waist bone' in the human body.

So terribly written, i gave up reading this whatever you call it.

I thought the story itself was pretty good but as others said the grammar was not very good. If course being American we sometimes overlook that not everyone is.

I liked the story. You need to proof read your work though. 5 stars!