All Comments on 'The Cruise'

by Odeon1776a

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Glad to read of Michael's sexy description -- the salt and pepper hair splayed across his sexy manly chest.

Rancher46Rancher46about 2 years ago

Great continuation of the original stories. Well done 5++stars

Rancher46Rancher46about 2 years ago

What a journey Michael and Sharon they have had, first they reunite at their class reunion in "The Reunion", then through that story they found a second love and a new life together. When this story continued their journey via "The Cruise" it brought Michael's past into Sharon and his present life by introducing Janice a young officer that was like Michael's daughter in the Navy, then through Michael she gave Michael the children he could never have from his first dying wife, twins at that being named "Michael Jason for the boy and Sharon Faith for the girl," to become Michael and Sharon's name's sake. Well written with excellent character development.

Based on what I have read these 2 stories would make a wonderful start to great series if the author could see fit to continue it. Well done 5+++++stars!

muskyboymuskyboyabout 2 years ago

One of the best sequels I have read. Very well done. Your descriptions of the emotions and affections was among the very best. Thanks for this! 5/5

goodshoes2goodshoes2about 1 year ago

What a ride, and it was great!

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