All Comments on 'The Cruise'

I loved it!. I look forward to your stories. The total freedom with which Jessie enjoys herself is something I will always dream about.

Not only made it all the way, but gave you 5 stars!

very nice story

Lovely story just slightly marred by the spelling errors.

Great story. It took some time to read the whole thing. But after I finished I felt like I had been on a sex cruise with you. Thanks for the holiday.

Really enjoyed that. You made the characters and scenes come to life effortlessly and it felt like I was there sharing in the obvious thrill and enjoyment of what was am amazing vacation.

Wow! Fabulous story thank you. X

I think that the story was quite hot. Really Hot actually and I enjoy the different deviled into days.

I loved it I also would love to find a woman just like you with a Little something extra.I loved to hear about your adventures and more in the future

dang, this was so erotic,

Wow, wow, wow. I want that holiday, hot and sexy as hell!

I read it right to the end- it is the first of your works I have read-and I can assure you it won't be the last ! I was rock hard all the way through it- and will now have a play ! Thank you !

Omg!! I love this! I am dreaming that this was me!! I definitely have all the stars.. thank you!

I don’t normally read these long stories but it is well written and worth reading in sections, well done.

Loved your story telling hon. I would really love to do a cruise like that someday.

I loved it! I would soo love to go on a cruise like this. I saw myself in each scenario. 💞

Im sure Im amongst the many that want to sign up for your next vaca !

Great story enjoyed reading your transition into a wanton lady. The fun you had was amazing never a dull moment had me excited for you.

I LOVED it. I love how the story progresses from overcoming a failed relationship, unleashing what has always been, getting back on your heels and go on a cruise. I LOVED reading how the scenes progressed from kinky to kinkier. Thank you for sharing