All Comments on 'The Cruise of a Lifetime Pt. 01'

Solid story - the transition from "disinterested" siblings to lovers was a little rushed for me. I do look forward to the next part...or two. 4*

The story would have been a lot better if you hadn't rushed through it. needs more details of the sex acts, more foreplay, and more details about them.

I wonder if bro knows what a pussy is?

Agree with Desmosthenes - galloped through the whole sis/bro seduction without too much time lapse.

Would have been better for a little longer in the change from siblings to lovers.

4****

But I appreciated not having to deal with all the sibling angst that takes over so many brother/sister stories. Looking forward to more of their adventure...

Since their sex was unprotected, is Jo looking to get pregnant by her brother?????

Reads more like a book review than a bro/sis fuck story.

Doesn't the brother like the taste of pussy?