by kinkyboy1111
That's it?
It blows!
GREAT STORY, PLEASE CONTINUE WITH IT.
great start ..... continue on with it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Why the long break? Why the hesitancy to re-engage the sex? Felt really contrived.
5 Stars. Please write many more chapters.
A teasing intro to a new series after your resort series (loved it!). And you've dropped it. Rats