All Comments on 'The Crumpled Letter'

Not real life. Ask anyone who has been in divorce court. Husbands balls always cut off, normally with a very dull knife.

Classic JPB ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

You can warm yourself from the glow of the nuclear blast in the distance.

5 stars - Yes, JPB finally wrote a story that kept my interest to the very last word.

Neither one of these characters are very likeable.

The cheating, skanky, SLUT got exactly what she deserved. The part that upset me the most was the murder of the unborn baby. Hopefully, in any future stories, Bob will have the SLUT keep the baby to term and then give it up for adoption.

I would have enjoyed a confrontation where she explained and then rationalized her actions. Other than that, a good tale.

See, see,see, JPB can write a story w/ an MC who has a spine conviction morals etc. Bet the cunt voted democrap w/ her arrogance and entitlement and self righteous certitude that she was the smartest biatch in de room and boss of her world and cldnt be denied. kudos Bob! "skruff101" agrees wif me. rk

Brilliant

Well slap butter on my ass and call me a biscuit (read that in a story on here once thought it was funny) a JPB effort that actually ends in divorce, and not ruined with a divorce followed by a lame assed reconciliation.

For once well done.

The cheating whore got what she deserved.

Very lame revenge.

I take issue with @Ruttweiler's comment that JPB's stories come from rudimentary AI. Computer-generated stories would probably be more plausible, although this story is one of the less dumb of JPB's collection.

An accomplished professional woman is not going to end up waiting tables even with a shaky recommendation.

It’s more of a chest-beating exercise for the “Me Trog with big stick” set. Bob can spew these out by the dozens with his “Bob-o-Link” story generator. It’s template-based with rudimentary AI.

Now that was a down the line, hall of fame BTB. Unfortunately this is not the type of story I enjoy. The MC ended up being an even bigger cunt than his wife. Go ahead and get divorced and fight for whatever you can get, I'm all for it. However all the rest was so beyond petty. So the wife cheated and now I think it was because deep down she knew her husband was a piece of shit

A load of utter carp. Author obviously has zero knowledge of how divorces proceed in court.

The author has over 800 stories on Lit. I suggest that maybe they spend more time on research and less time writing ill considered drivel.

Somewhat disappointing. There are several avenues of pursuit that would make more interesting stories. But then, perhaps you are pursuing them elsewhere.

I would have told her that I'd had my vasectomy reversed several months ago and was going to pursue the option of children. And, BTW, you seem to be showing some signs of pregnancy and we should cancel the Boston trip for health reasons get you checked out tomorrow.

Oh what a lovely mess he would have created.

A 4 Star...not quite 5 because of the open ended ending: Is Trace coming to town and will he be dealt with?

Revenge shows a lack of a forgiving nature and this story just reinforces the angry man persona. I would want to be married to him she's better off out of that relationship even though she cheated.

One thing that is hard to swallow in stories like this is that the wife is clueless as to why the husband moves money and moves out. A normal person would most likely guess that the husband had discovered the affair.

Good story 5/5

Wow. A rarity from JPB.

A great story.

So unlike JPB's many wimp stories.

I loved leaving out useless questions.

That's how you avoid useless answers.

I agree with comments saying this is one of JPB's best stories.

Top ratings from me.

why bob why ,cause she a whore bob .

Why did she need to get a job if she had 50% of their assets?

excellent .

the cuck faggots will hate this one and try to nitpick it to death .

enjoy faggots .

5 stars

Why were there no questions as to the possibility as to the husband being the father of the aborted baby?

Would that not have caused the judge to take a different approach on the division of assets?

As to the one commentor whining because the husband refused to meet with/talk to his wife. That is more than comical. IF the wife had problem with the husband, prior to having an affair, WHY did she not approach her husband? The way the story reads, she just WANTED to have an affair.

After having concluded the possibility of her husband being the father of her unborn baby was irrelevant, she had the unborn baby murdered, her tubes tied so she could continue her affair without another pregnancy. again, another swipe at her husband.

WHY would the husband want to waste his time "talking" to someone who obviously held him in contempt.

Great and with an ending too!

Cold cold cold

He ends up in jail for extortion and his attorney disbarred for helping him commit a criminal offense. You can’t blackmail someone to get a financial windfall.

Done right.

Finally a good one

Pussy story

His revenge is over the top,he was just plain nasty.

Good tale JPB. LP

Well done. Good editing too. These negotiate comments are irratating, I know, I would ignore them. You did not make him out to be the kind of husband that would cause a wife to stray, he even fucked her brains out after he knew she was cheating, but his punishment was civilized considering what he could have done to Trace and her when they all were in Boston. I think most of the guys that read this will agree, she and her boytoy got off easy. Nice job. Keep writing.

XYZ

Sorry, Bob, I usually enjoy your stuff but I am getting really tired of these infantile boy-men who close down all communication. Sometimes “why” matters. Suppose Our Hero had been partly to blame because he has an asshole streak that he himself is totally unaware of. Maybe she was being blackmailed and she was protecting both of them from something dire. there could ve a million motivations. Not saying any of that would justify what Wifey did, but they could have had an adult conversation and maybe, just maybe, Our Hero might have learned a little something. Instead, he reacted without getting enough information. Just sayin’, a little maturity gies a long way, and you could still have a wonderfully tragic story.

"And then I woke up..."

The plot is juvenile, and lala-land fantasy material.

There is not one judge in all of USA who would make such a ruling, and assuming there was, the appeal judge would overturn the decision.

Nice fantasy...but that's all it is!

Great story, very well written and the perfect outcome.

Les

Excellent JPB ..... I Love this B2B .

Give them the taste of their own Medicine.

Break them to Despair.

One of JPBs better efforts.

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4 ****

5 stars - mostly because he divorced her and did not commit any violent revenge.

Really liked the story except you never explained how or why Madeline hooked up with Mr. Trace Mueller. That action is the heart of your story.

Good story, with one exception. I really would have liked to have seen good old Trace get what he had coming. And come to think of it, I’d like to know how and why Trace and Madeline got together. I know it ain’t going to happen, but that doesn’t stop me from wanting. Like I said, good story, JPB.

Rob had a vasectomy, therefore was not able to inseminate the slut. She was screwing tracie, the only one left was tracie. ( no caps for slime-ball tracie) """""To those asking "why?" She's obviously a passionate person, on long business trips."""" sbrooks103x"""" AYSM?

Great story.

Who was the father of the aborted fetus? Could not the father have been Rob as easily as it could have been Trace? Why would Rob allow her to abort his child without a word of protest?

I really liked it. For one, the protagonist was not a wishy-washy individual. Didn't really care for the why or when, except to see the actual journey to the abortion clinic. Once he decided to get rid of his cheating spouse, Rob made plans and went for the throat and did not sway from the course. No second guessing on his part and doubting himself. Great story line! Way to go JPB.

Gotta’ love a happy ending.

To those asking "why?" She's obviously a passionate person, on long business trips.

This is one of the best stories JPB wrote, without absurdities although the actions of wife after the hubby left home were rather strange. One would assume that she would have some inkling about the reason rather than acting surprised but I guess this is how JPB wanted to drive the plot. JPB writing is always weak on character development son, just like in every other story, there is no character development here.

Weak writer but not a bad story with these limitations.

For those who ask why? Because she could. That's why. women think they have the courts and everything on their side when they cheat. They get the lions share. They are entitled like so many in this fucked up society think they are.

It is a good story. Thank-you

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One thing to consider, as stated in the story, his having her medical reports is illegal. By admitting he had them, he left himself open to legal repercussions. He can be arrested and/or sued. Even if the judge was pre-disposed to favor the cheated on spouse, doing what he did in regards to the house is considered fraud and hubby can get in trouble for that as well.

This was nearly a home run!

Sometimes old Bob writes a great story. This was definitely one of those times.

I'm glad the author didn't go into the "Why." It doesn't matter at all! She's nothing but a cheating whore and deserves to be shunned by her family members for that.

To me it wouldn’t make a whit of difference “why” she did it. Just the simple fact that she DID do it is enough to kill any relationship we may have ever had. She could reflect on the why’s and wherefore’s after she signed the divorce paperwork. Nice story, JPB.

still don't know why it happened

She knew something was wrong...but still kept up her act...we see everything from his point of view...but not hers...her cheating is the story here...so what happens to her is important...but were only left to guessing what happened here....the ending stinks......

This still could be one of you best stories ever! I've read it several times. Sure, the actual mystery of WHY she did it is out there, but in this story, I'm okay with that. not every story has to have every question answered. But him crushing her in a way that didn't involve physical harming was brilliant. BRAVO

That was an awesome BtB.

I would've liked to have seen some vengeance against the lover, but there was one thing this story really needed: A final confrontation with the ex-wife after he rained down a torrent of shit on her life.

Seeing Madeline heartbroken and devastated after he utterly destroyed everything she cared about would've been the icing on the cake. She lost her husband, lover, house, family, and career. That's an impressive bit of bitch burning.

She got exactly what she deserved

JPB doesn't waste words. He attacks the story using ordinary language, facing the ultimate test to relationships. 5 stars

reasonable man

He didn’t have to offer NOT to contact her family. It was the decent thing to do, and affirmed that he was the better person. Instead she bluffed holding no cards and got what she earned and deserved.

Good job!

JPB's best in my opinion. Love the "do you hate me that much, just because I'm a.lying,.cheating, bitch?"

"No, I hate you for calling me Sweetums! "

with a nice twist to it. She got what she deserved, except I think she should have been prosecuted for her expense fraud.

You got it RIGHT...

while cheating is BAD and usually unforgivable.....having another man's child while married to another is the ultimate breech. that's the ENTIRE reason traditional societies did the awful virginal bride thing. men wanted to have early sex, women wanted to have early sex, but no one did for fear of ruining the virginal bride thing. we didn't have DNA tests.

and she tied he tubes to continue her affair and deny her husband a child. that's just evil. but i'm glad he left her and her tubes are tied. maybe she'll never ruin a poor child's life with her terrible choices.

Good story

Great payback for her

Liked the trashcan

You are the queen of male to female bitch mode husbands. with no sack. Catholics are not the 50s type you just wrote. Im catholic just a pussy /just lame bobby.

I've read it before and I still think it's a great read. I'm always amused when a cheating spouse becomes incensed because they think their spouse is cheating on them. But that Mueller guy needs some serious pay back! There is nothing lower than a man who has sex with a married woman (well, unless she's his wife...).

Finally, a man with backbone. It's a shame that ALL your stories aren't this good, to be honest

Five stars

An enjoyable story, but I would have enjoyed it a little bit more if we had heard something from the wife. Why'd she do it, if she supposedly loved her husband? -JRZ

at least he didn`t wimp out and take her back

One of JPB's better stories. It had a solid BTB that was richly deserved.

An ending on a JPB tale?

How novel!

For two reasons. I do not like over-the-top burn the bitch revengeance stories. They do not give me a warm feeling that some folks apparently get.

Also do not like when husband will not listen/talk with wife. In one story I read he finally listened a year later (they were already divorced) and consequently went back to her. Furthermore, how can I find out her thinking and his rebuttal? I'm curious.

Paul in Oklahoma

this is one of JPB's better ones. It has an ending!

He could ask the private detective more about the asshole Trace and make a weekend trip to visit him with collapsible baton for a little kneecap work. And why the finishing bits about still loving her? What that slut did would kill everything that resembles love from any guy who actually had testosterone in his system. only a cuckold faggot could hold onto any affection for someone who fucks around n him like that.

Always fun to read a complete and total victory from a man getting his pound of flesh out of a cheating wife.

I've read some of the comments, and, evidently, a lot of people seemed puzzle that Mad would take this long to figure out that Rob was gone for good... but I will counter this with a simple explanation: Madeline is a moron. I mean, only a moron would have take Rob's threat about exposing her immoral actions as a bluff, especially given everything he had done to her thus far.

The dumb bitch got what she deserves; Rob can now go MGTOW from now on. except for the weekly one night stand, and focus on becoming as successful as possible... yes, quite a victory for this very reluctant cuckold.

Gotta love it.

nothing but shit here(

Now he needs to burn her lover.

But what a bitch!

Good burning!

A solid 5 for burning the bitch!

The screaming tantrums from the cuck queens and self-righteous cheaters should tell you that you hit the nail on the head.

Not a lot going for this story. Sorry.

It is an entreating fantasy.

Why keep writing the same stupid story? You obviously don't have a clue how the legal system in America works, and the idiotic "I was righteous so the judge gave me everything" device you keep trotting out just makes you look stupid. Talk to an attorney and learn how divorces really work, or just don't write about them.

When you steal confidential medical records and then use them for extortion, you don't get charged with contempt. You get charged with larceny, conspiracy, extortion, and a host of other felonies that would land your sorry ass in prison for years. Your eponymous character would also end up on the receiving and losing end of an invasion of privacy lawsuit. Also, it's only in Jerkoff Bob's world where families side with the ex-spouse of their children/siblings.

What in holy fuck is your major malfunction, Bob?

my numbers were wrong, and I was wrong to post it.

And a perfect example of how fast your heart can go from love to hate. Madeline was an example of a complete, self centered bitch. She's so confident that she's never going to get caught cheating that it never occurs to her that when he tells her that "there is someone else" it was her someone else that he was referring to. Talk about conceited. Glad that he came out of the divorce as well as he did. Had she lost her job too soon he might have had to pay her alimony. That would have sucked. Good story Bob.

You know, it would be really funny reading another side of this tale from Madeline's point of view. It would be a proclamation of stupidity.

Yeah

@betrayedbylove I think you and everyone else who read the anonymous comment knows who made it but the question is why? From the usage he twice used some of his more popular barbs and the misspellings are totally overdone.

This is for the last anon.

Go fuck yourself asshole. He-man my ass. Prick.

Now about the tale. This worthless fucking cunt has to top the list for the most stupid cheater to ever live. Did you ever hear of condoms, bitch? To our hero, it was just dumb luck he found the letter in her wastebasket. He did everything right afterwards. The cunt got what she deserved. With any luck the asshole lover will show up for his beating.

Yah, me He-Man. Me bad ass.

Ha

I just love reading all these responses where all them BRBers just go crazy with saliva dripping from the corners of their mouths and jumping at the chance to tell us poor ignant fools just what tough ass heemen de truly is. They love to say how they draw and quarter any woman who would ever attempt to run a fowl of them. They love to tell us how they'd women know they are so lucky to be with true studs like themselves.

It is also hilarious to hear how worked up they get and how much criticism they heap upon the authors for not going far enough in revenge on FICTIONAL CHARACTERS. Really, yelling and screaming how she should have been taken out and beheaded for such disrespect? LOL my ass off (and I have a pretty big ass) when I read all the complaints of the story not going far enough in revenge. If you want more, put YOUR thoughts on paper for the rest of us to read. Until then shut the hell up you Ernest Hemmingway wanna be's.

and I guess he forgot the A of A suit about Mueller,,,TK U MLJ LV NV

Some revenge on everybody. Even if he had to split the money 50/50. And he did cause Trace some problems by sending the information to everyone Trace knew. I hope he got the divorce over with before wifey got canned. Judges and alimony ya know. Well done story. Fun to read.

"My major regret is that Boston is sixteen hundred miles away and I don't know the place or anyone there. That makes doing something to Mueller almost impossible."

Naw, as long as they're on planet earth, they are never too far away.

I found out my wife fucked an employee of ours, I own(ed) a trucking company. He somehow talked himself into her pants and I happened to see it the last time, I assume, it happened, and had my phone and taped it. I also found some correspondence online between them. She just wanted to be fucked by some strange cock, but like she used to always tell me before we were married and demanded fidelity from me (which I followed), once a cheater, always a cheater. I assumed it wasn't the first time. My intense love for her instantly because an intense hate. Thankfully, our kids were grown and married.

Our employee, I'll call him 'Tom', lived 2400 miles away in Florida. He moved after he was hired, but as a long haul trucking company, it made no difference to me where he lived. So 'Tom', left our company base, after fucking my wife about 6 times in 2 days and went home to his wife. That did not put him out of my reach.

While my wife was at work, I sold the company. I started it before we were married and made all the decisions and did all the work. She worked as a secretary for a Doctors office. She didn't even know another company had taken over. I cashed it out, took it in a cashiers check, then when she was at a 3 day conference, I took everything from our home (Oregon) and with the help of a couple former employee's, loaded everything in a Uhaul van. Our home was a rental, she didn't want to buy until we were ready to build our own house, so I walked away.

I always wanted to live in Montana, I'm a huge deer and elk hunter, so I moved there without a word. All the pictures I had of them, I printed off before I left and left a picture of them fucking, in every room, taped to every wall, I had thousands ran off. The house was almost wall to wall covered. I even put prints inside every dress hanging in her closet, at the top and bottom of each drawer of her dresser. I even put them under the blankets, on the sheet and under her pillow. Mine was gone.

I emptied my 401K, paying an early withdrawal penalty, our savings but left her the few thousand in our checking. I took it all in cash. And then I disappeared from her life. My kids knew, I sent them all her and her boyfriends correspondence, along with pictures and swore them to secrecy. I think it was her deriding me to her boyfriend, in print they could read, that made them cut her out of their lives.

The kids told me when she came home that first day, she was in complete panic mode. She saw the pictures, saw all my stuff was gone and my wedding ring sitting in the middle of the kitchen table directly in the center of a picture of Tom banging her doggy style. If I'd have thought far enough ahead, I'd have put a remote recorder in so I could watch her reaction. It seems she wasn't quite as in love with her married boyfriend as she thought.

The kids told me she was screaming and nearly incoherent when she called. She kept telling them she was sorry, it was a short term spur of the moment lapse in judgment. They told her not to worry, it was just a spur of the moment lapse that they didn't want to see her ever again, she wasn't welcome at their homes, she had destroyed her family. I'd like to say I felt sorry for her, but I didn't. I also didn't file for divorce. Let the cheating skanky cunt do it.

I bought a very small piece of property in Kalispell, 8 acres and built a tiny cabin, enough for me and my cat'n'dog. I paid for it all in cash and put it in my daughter's name, she flew in to sign papers. I found that her mother was despondent, couldn't make the monthly payments on our rental and was trying to hire a PI to find me but couldn't afford it and our kids wouldn't loan her money.

Fast forward 5 years. She finally found me. The kids and their families came to my place for Thanksgiving and she followed them, or rather, had a PI follow them. I still didn't have any money in the bank, it was and still is, hidden within my cabin, enough to last me the rest of my life if I didn't every work again. But I'd found a job for a neighbor, cash each Friday and more than enough to live on.

I have to admit, I was pretty surprised when early one morning, I heard a knock on the door and it was my wife. I slammed it in her face, locked it, as she began to scream at me. I walked out the back door after locking it and walked in a straight line to my neighbors house and went to work. I didn't go home for 7 days. She wasn't able to enter my cabin while I was gone and I thought she'd disappeared. I was wrong.

She moved to Kalispell, renting a home less than 10 miles away. How she paid for it I don't know, but she found a job in town, knowing I wouldn't move from my dream home. She was right. And ended up hounding me unmercifully, begging me to take her back. Instead, I had her served divorce papers since I knew where she lived! She got nasty, trying to get half my place in the settlement and also the money I left with. Too bad, I told the court I gambled it away in Vegas and bought whores too. Her lawyer had to give her the bad news, she could have me thrown in jail, but I didn't own anything and she was shocked to find her daughter owned my home, not her. When she attacked my daughter, she lost any contact with her famil or grandkids. We are divorced now, she drives an old Honda Civic, lives in a tiny run down home and I still live in my cabin, or, my daughters cabin!

You are right about not being able to turn off emotions, but they can sure change in one hell of a hurry. When I found out that my wife was in reality a lying cheating slut. it went from total love to total hate in the matter of a day or so. I made no attempt to reconcile. At the time we had three kids. I got custody but had to pay her a small alimony. Now 14 years later, only one of the kids even speaks to her except for holidays. We had almost comparable salaries at the time. Now 14 years later, I have a 100 acre farm, a city house where I live with my new wife and a rental house. We take nice vacations. (Europe and Caribbean). My ex, she lives in a single wide and they repossessed her car several months ago. Do I hate her? Absolutely. But there is no emotional investment. I merely smile as I think about my hands around her throat and where I could hide the body.

Way to go! The husband is a real man! Wimps, pay attention! If you can't or don't, you deserve to be stepped on!

nice tidy job. I wonder if there was not a pregnancy involved, if it would have turned out the same, at least from the hubbies stand point.

Shred, not Crumple. TK U MLJ LV NV