All Comments on 'The Crush'

I normally skip any "romance" stories in Febuary, as they are so cookie cutter. I am very happy I read your submission. It was not the (in my mind) typical valentines story. thanks and please keep them coming.

Thank you again. A lovely valentine story!

A bit of a departure of your usual fare, well written and fun to read.

I wish I knew the name of the chemical used in the chocolate to give me a "sexual pick me up". LOL @ all those nerds on that poor woman! Can u imagine something so potent like that to make u sooooooooo horny u don't care who u get sex from?!?!

I was not too happy with the aphrodisiac candy since I do not believe there is

such a thing and the whole idea of vengeance for being used does not attract me, but the affair with the cougar and the romance with his childhood sweet heart were great reading....

The cougar got gang-banged while high on a date-rape drug. She loved every minute of it, apparently. Is this revenge? Did the fiance find out? Did she regret the gang-bang later? Does she even realize what happened and why? What did she learn, if anything?

Good story, but a BIG loose end!

Didn't get the drug gangbang part. Seemed tangential.

A cheeringly frothy sex tale with a touch of romance and some implausible chocolates. Well done.

Good work DG, enjoyed it!

Nice, hot story, DG. I enjoyed it. Of course, the aphrodisiac candy could be real, especially if made by four smart college students. Read my pheromone story if you don't believe me. :-) I was a little worried when he went for revenge, but I thought the story ended very happily and right on theme. Keep it up!

Excellent story about a learning experience.

you have a very low opinion of men. I hope not all men are as sleazy as you believe.

About kids growing up to become adults -

Short and sweet story where a young man learns that love really is more important, and lasting, than sex is.

What did he do with the video?

Getting revenge on Sandy was a bit childish,he knew they could never be a couple so why didn't he just thank her for all that she had taught him and move on like a grown up.

A much better story and rendition than The Cruise. This is worth 5*. Thx

BJ