by Hotelroom
Well - i have read and enjoyed many of your stories-this was very different and I thoroughly enjoyed it and was hard throughout my reading of it . Thank you- you are clearly a very imaginative and talented writer . This theme could also be extended into a part two.
Definitely different from the rest of your stories, but I liked it! Well done!!!
I love the story. Being an atheist I like it when the church gets more corrupted.Hope you write some more chapters.