All Comments on 'The Cuckold Diet Challenge Ch. 06'

This story is incredibly repetitive. The same dialogue between the same characters over and over and over again. In this chapter the MC is very inconsistent. Showing extreme sorrow and regret to Tina, apologizing profusely. Then continuing with his passive aggressive narrative and repeating for the umpteenth time, "I can't stop seeing them in my mind. All those things you did but never with me blah blah blah." Yes. we get it at this point. Now finish the damn story, seriously, we're begging you.

5*****. So he's finally woken up to the truth. Whos' John the children spoke of? I bet the teenagers Shelly nearly spoke of were Interns at Daniels workplace she fucked.

Dude is trying hard, and he is realizing that he will not accept this. There are too many triggers for things too important to him.

This is still such a good story. It's easy to say, "Screw that slut, I am outta here!" That is a good answer.

But, this, to stand up some, to wreck the contract, stand up some more, exact some revenge, and then start to wonder if it can work out.

Then to realize, no, probably not, not and keep standing.

Still a good story. thank goodness not much extramarital unnecessary sex in this one, and to me, good sex is almost a requirement in a good literotica entry.

Still worth reading, still the best rating.

... thing's becoming a novel....

The same crap over and over. How many times does the keyboard spit out the same argument, or maybe it is a discussion? Over the top mehhhhhhh.

This guy has turned into a total pussy! If you're going to give it a try, give it a try.. Quit whining about the same shit over and over. If you can't take itl, cut and run.

I saw a comment about Rick having PTSD. I have friends who went through hell and back in Iraq and then when they got back home several of the wives ended up leaving them. They had either been unfaithful or couldn't deal. None of my friends ever acted like such a pussy as this dude and they have very real and serious cases of PTSD

I was about to give up and rate this story a 2, but I finished it and Rick finally got it together and overall a great read

Professional therapists are just academic experts of pussification😂

Professional therapists know that on average it can take anywhere from 2-5 years to fully recover from infidelity. That's with regular cheating and affairs not the kind of humiliation, torment and physical and emotional abuse Danielle subjected Rick to. PTSD, or post-traumatic stress disorder, is a mental health condition that can occur after experiencing or witnessing a traumatic event. PTSD from cheating is often called “betrayal trauma.” This is because the betrayal of trust can be so damaging to the relationship that it feels like a traumatic event. And, just like with other forms of PTSD, the symptoms of betrayal trauma can be debilitating. So, to all the critics of Rick, he's not being whinny pussy. He's actually experiencing PTSD

Danielle's more worried about going to church than what she subjected her husband to. Typical hypocrite

All I can say is, Rick is one stupid dude. He had three naked hot women lying in his bed, and all he could think about is how much of a martyr he wants to be. How pathetic.

I still love this story but it is draggingbeven more; time to make a decision, Tom, and FTDS is overdue to quit beating the horse, it is already dead.

Make up your mind. Either forgive her or get out. Shit happens, but now he's just becoming a whining pussy.

amazing story, so much better than the original author you referred to. I don't think I could ever live with her again

While I enjoyed the story line, it's getting much too repetitive. Back and forth, back and forth, back and forth. Too many chapters that say too little. Enough already! If there are any twists, bring them on! I keep reading the same things over and over again.

He's doing all this work, putting up with her and her friends with the big meat buddies,for the kids.Why not simply go for the divorce, show the judge the tapes and let the judge decide if she is an unfit mother.....Or, does he deep down enjoy seeing her being a tramp bringing home her foul body with her lovers on and in her for him to clean up and clean out? Twill be interesting to find out which. LP

Fucking boring repetitive sex scenes. Why do writers fill stories with pages of this shit? One single HOT scene is way way better than 3 pages of the same thing over and over again.

Toooooo much cardio will cause a heart attack

Rick should get councilling. It is true she lied and acted like a complete whore. Maybe he should sell those apes to a porn site. Danielle still doesn't believe the situation she caused, and probably, if no longer married, would be nothing but a big-cock slut. Too many things she'd never do with her husband, she willingly did with those assholes on video. Rick shouldn't have helped Tina and the other slut, either...

Damn

This is getting a little tedious. Are they or are they not going to get back together? He cheated and she went overboard. What now?

He's got all of that money, just disappear that bitch!!

the kids mentioned John... who is that? never mentioned again.

4 for this chapter. down a bit. gamblnluck

like a sinking ship, this is turning into the original cuck story chapter one was :0/

Exercise for his health and future girlfriend; not to mention his sex life after dumping the slut!!!

He?

Take your own advice and FINISH THE DAMN STORY!

This is getting to be drawn out and overly repetitive. Danielle doesn't know when to talk to Rick and when to shut her damned mouth. And why does she have to have Tina and Shelly in her home all the time? Do you know who has the firmest grasp of the situation? Eric and Erin! This marriage is dead. Time to bury it and move on. Danielle has become an expert at twisting what Rick says and what he doesn't say to mean what she wanted to believe so she could cheat and torment Rick. She has totally destroyed every vestige of Rick's manhood. This was never about losing weight. It was always about destroying a reasonably good man.

the clock expired and the game has no winner, TK U MLJ LV NV

I guess FTDS helped this miserable piece of shit, but it was still fucked up. And Rick is still one huge PUSSY. FTDS is very good, but he had nothing to work with here.

We miss you FTDS.

...it's starting to become diffucult to sympathize with the main character Rick. The guy is getting more ass than he could ever have imagined by 5 incredibly hot women of various ages. Sure, it was nightmare of an experience, but in reality it seems maybe at this point of the story he should consider on the scale of things, life is pretty good. It now appears he is milking the situation, justifiably or not, for all it's worth. I can dig that, but he should be enough in contact with reality to admit to himself he is now king of a little harem of 5 gorgeous babes. Rick has his own pussy palace. At this junction of the story he sounds like a winey little bitch. Also I give the author 5 Stars on all chapters. I love FTDS's story's. I can't believe some of the negative comments by some of the posters here. These nitwit critics are pathetically ignorant of how great the writing talent this author has. Shame.

Just brilliant how you have the reader convinced this woman has changed.

Fish or cut bait. Sink or swim. Get off your ass, Rick.

Hell, with all the "smokin' hot babes" he's plugging, the contract was the best move he ever made!

I think the author is doing a great job of writing how even if the people involved want to reconcile sometimes the acts will slowly deteriate the relationship no matter what is done. Seeing the videos like he has would be a very very tall hurdle to overcome for anyone in love with their significant other. Don't think I personally could get over it myself. I really like the verbal exchanges between him and his wife well written good job!

I don't get it. Just fucking get over it. Everybody is doing everything they can to make it up and he just doesn't WANT to let it go. He is as big a prick as have ever been described on this site.

Most boring, long-winded, repetitive story ever. This shit is worse than the original. And that was pretty fucking bad.

"We screwed up. I've admitted it and apologized” – Yeah, and saying that HE’S 90% to blame, while fucking Meat 2 when they KNEW he DIDN’T want to be a cuckold!

As I believe others have said, there's never been any explanation for how easily she took a 12" cock if she really had never had anything but his normal cock for 20 years!

Yes, he screwed up first with the hooker, and he DID let himself go, but she could have TALKED to him about his weight, and the hooker COULD have been used for SOME “revenge” sex, but what she did was WAY over the top.

Yes, his response was extreme, and maybe he DID go overboard, but it wasn’t exactly unprovoked, and he shouldn’t beat himself up so much over it!

Okay, I’m NOT a RAAC, if anything I lean towards BTB, and I definitely have NOT made up my mind if Danielle has earned reconciliation, but if they BOTH want it, and are willing to WORK at it, as it APPEARS they do, then I guess I’m okay with it.

“It was just a stupid joke. I wish you wouldn't blow it all out of proportion.”

After all he/they have gone through, he’s got a RIGHT to “blow it all out of proportion.”

I’m not sure, and it may not even help, but maybe Shelly and Toni have to get out of their lives at least for a while, they seem to be reminders, triggering memories of what he’s gone through.

“You couldn't be more wrong. None of us see you that way.”

Maybe THEY don’t, but that doesn’t change how HE feels.

Shelly STILL doesn’t get it! She’s still trying to minimize the third time, and using that tired, old Loving Wives trope of the “fragile male ego”, but HE’S supposed to be sensitive to Dani's feelings when he can’t maintain his erection with her!

He doesn’t want to confront her about the third time, but he told Shelly, doesn’t he think she told Dani?

And not because it takes time to read, but because it's just dragged out pointlessly, going round and round and back around again, needlessly. More than half of it is pointless repetition, just to fill space. It could actually be a decent story, if it was condensed into 2 or 3 chapters. Each chapter of this feels like reading the previous one, all over again, with little or no progression, and very little of anything new. Quit flogging that dead horse, he ain't getting up anymore!

This story, while good, is starting wear on me. Actually, it started doing that about 3 chapters ago. Why is this dude still dealing with the pain? I mean yes, it's obviously very painful but come on. Six weeks of the same crap? I'd be healing already but all that time has proven to do is heal very little, if any. He just keeps poking his old wounds. He says he's not a wimp but all I'm hearing is the same old boohoo, woe is me crap. This dude just needs to let time play things out and then he'll really see if she's changed or not. He needs to suck it up, grow a pair and bed his wife and force the images out of his head. To stop being a pussy about it. I've been in some situations that have scarred me and left images in my mind that wouldn't go away. It took me a good two weeks of consciously fighting them but they finally died down enough to not haunt my sleep. Over time, it will become like a bad dream that you always remember but it will fade. That guy just needs to man up.

John is still out there -

Her true motivation is still out there -

Her true desires for the future is still out there -

Rick cheated first, he cheated last and he cheated the most. Danielle only cheated for revenge because she was hurting. Throw in his petty vindictivness getting Tina abused by her husband and the fact that he'll always be a cheater means having Danielle ever wanting his sorry ass back just stupid. Even his own kids know he's screwing around. When you start having Shelly acting the way she is, well that's just silly crap. This doesn't even deserve 1 star.

No, not John Galt. Who is "John" that the kids mentioned? Danielle have a longterm backdoor man?

support his rage, and to all you fem-men haters the fucks that say its a pity party,fuck you, i hope your family get fucked over like this, man some of you people r freaks.

she is a lying cheating bully and deserves pain,suffering, as a friend said once " a dead bully in the school yard is a great day for anybody not perfect", she still loves her bi bully friends.....she has it all coming in spades..no mercy was shown ..none is given. god i hope she gets destroyed...then you will read all the cry babies saying it went to far..collect the tears then in a glass and toast to the end of reconciliation at any cost.

Who has the bigger CUNT? Rick, the pathetic excuse of a man who doesn't have the balls to beat .. Yeah I said BEAT ... THE LIVING SHIT out his TRAMP wife and then kick her lying ass to the curb -or- Danielle, the disgusting, lying, ANAL, ATM WHORE, who will spread her twat lips like three day old rancid butter the first time a big cock appears -or- YOU for turning the story into just another pile of CUCK SHIT with your pathetic attempt to "buy" sympathy from the readers for the SKANK wife while completely castrating the wimp husband thru reconciliation .... at all cost!

WELL????????

.... You know on second thought just forget the question, go back to your cuck closet and .... DON'T FinishThisDamnStory or any future stories that you dream up in your demented little cuck mind....

In a lot a ways the story here is simply repeating ... going around the circle with the same arguments even if the dialog is still pretty snappy and well done. Just when Rick and the wife were beginning to make some progress everything slips back. In marriages which have come to a serious trauma like this this sort of thing can and DOES happen.

But the intervention of Shelly and Tina into the marriage and their use of the bodies is making things worse. Sure those 2 women may be well meaning and trying to Build up Rick's emasculated ego/ persona BUT it comes across to Rick has being very artificial and a constant reminder of what THEY and his wife did.

It is impossible for Rick and Danielle to get back to "normal" or to get past recent events IF the close friends of the cheating wife are still hanging around and associating with her.

This guy is turning into a whiney little bitch now. I know he was done dirty and he was the butt of a lot of jokes. But this guy got revenge and then some. He ran the guys out of town, got one friend fired, and got the other friend in trouble with her husband. His wife is a bawling mess of emotions, begging and pleading with him for the smallest sign of love. He fucked both of this wife's best friends. got to sleep with a sexy assistant and a personal trainer. On to of all of that, all of the women are bending over backwards to build his self confidence. They all are giving glowing testimonials of his ability in bed. If his ego is still crushed then I am starting to believe that it is just his image of himself. Yes those guys had bigger dicks than him. That's life. By now I feel that he needs to get over it. There is nothing else that can be done for penance. I was with him and was happy at how things starting turning around for him. But now the only reason that this story isn't wrapped up is because every time they make progress he starts acting like a bitch. If what has happened is still not enough, then he needs to get divorced and stop dragging everyone through this pity party. There are only two choices. Divorce or reconciliation. Right now he is just straddling the fence.

Sort of like Rick.

To tell the truth, I thought at the time that John was a class mate of the twins. A know it all. Now though the author owes an explanation to the massed commentators!

He does not have any good sense any more. Fucking his wife in front of her girl friends?? Now she can prove in court that he forgave her. Adding to his humiliation by failing in said intercourse? It was almost 90% chance. Finally calling off the PI??

He does not know anything.

Could the author be trying to prove that he can hold out attention without finishing the story. It reminds of some ten season TV shows.

FTDS seems to be writing these novels about men getting even by having sex with his wife's or fiancee's friends, who, while they are fucking and sucking him, are busy telling him how sorry his woman is that she did things with well-hung men that she never did with him.

I know some of you guys probably sit around and trash-talk women, but Jesus, are there really women like this, who create these extreme scenarios that help their friends cheat/get payback? Are women in a pack this dangerous? I must admit I have no great love for my own gender, having been burnt by my mother, sisters, friends, coworkers, neighbors, fellow volunteers...you name it. But I've never come across women like this, who scheme as a group to get what they want, and then, when it backfires, start with the verbal manipulations and reconstructive history. Who can believe anything they say? It might be entertaining reading, but please, someone tell me it's not realistic!

My understanding of the way men and women cheat is that the betrayed women get upset about theirs husband's investment of time, the stolen affection, the emotional bonding with the other woman, with her husband giving the other woman considerations he never gave her--like writing her poetry, going places she wants, buying her little surprise gifts, etc.

Whereas with the betrayed men, I thought it was the way their spouse dressed up and gave the other man sexual treats he never got. And I always thought that once a man actually sees the couple doing it, whether live or on DVD, it's all over. But in FTDS's sagas, the men jump right into the fray, doing the wife's friends, and I guess that distracts them, making them think the score is evened, and they can consider reconciliation?

The fact that the husband is having difficulty accepting what his wife did at the end of this chapter seems more realistic.

This sad little saga is somewhat like Chico Marx repeating the same refrain while playing the piano, while explaining he can't remember how it ends, except when Chico did it, it was funny. Please, please, PLEASE, put these sad characters and your readers out of their combined misery, and finish this damned story already!

Too much, "I'm sorry, I'm mad, I can't get images out of my head... "

What about Monday with Tina and divorce lawyer? That's good for a few chapters of twists and turns. Rick screws people then feels guilty. Not much of a lawyer, they screw people with zero remorse. Teenagers? Aren't they Meat and big cock #2? Young studs. John? Tina's son?

Once he gets it figured out that the kids are not his, by good ole DNA he will hit them all up for a sizeable amount of cash, and life his life with his trainer.Keep it going, it shows how fucked up some men get from a slut wife.

John is someone the kids know, but Hubby doesn't. Obviously he's around when Hubby isn't, and is at least friends with Wifey and the kids. Something is fishy there, and I think I finally see where this is going. Wifey is going to get fucked up, as is John, whoever he is. Chances are this is going to go thermonuclear before all the dust settles. FTDS, I REALLY hope you're planning to drop a 500 megaton warhead here.

Teenagers and John... And boom goes the dynamite.

But want to know how it ends. Will the next installment be the one? Please let it be so...

I can see now why your stories barely make it over 3*. You're an idiot.

put the marriage down like you would an injured animal. This is being stretched to far. If I were the husband, I would use the fuck tapes, get my kids and move on. There has to be a good woman somewhere in the area he at. Come on FTDS, do they live in Whoresville, Texas or something.

Just because a story is considered bad by people you do not like, that does not make it good. Try actually using your critical faculties. Your comment is among the stupidest things I have ever heard.

There was a lot of build up to a reconciliation, Rick was making love to Danielle (in front of Shelley and Tina?), then he loses his hard-on (without climaxing) because of bad flashbacks and self-doubts.

He even loses his self-control and downs a bacon cheeseburger, fries, and a sugar drink (coke). He works out on the treadmill far too long -- his behavior is self-destructive and a heart attack will ambush him if he doesn't watch out. Rick is in serious need of therapy, no doubt about it.

I had high hopes for this chapter but it does not seem as if there is any real progress towards resolution -- either divorce or forgiveness -- and Rick continues to wallow in self-pity and repetition. He has lost his way and has lost his confidence as a man. This chapter, like Rick's attempt to make love to Danielle, leaves us hanging and frustrated, a figurative blue-balls experience. Please FTDS.

FTDS! Finish the damn story! holy crap, you are a good writer and that is all that is keeping me going. It is time for Rick to get his shit together and get the fuck out of this mess! His wife is a slut, her friends are sluts and it is not going to change. End it now!

Who T F is John? I echo others in this regard. What and how do his kids know about him? Again, please don't introduce a character without some sort of explanation. In the same regard who is Denise? With the unexplained characters I think you're creating a novel instead of finishing a story.

Time to wrap it up. I think most commenters have enjoyed this so far but this is not your MO. Still a 5 in my book but faltering.

Really great writing. Next chapter awaited eagerly!

and the spell checker and editors are in a turmoil, TK U MLJ LV NV

The chapters are blurring, its time to end this, pleeeeez!!!!

You just keep going over the same old shit. She like 12 inch dicks, he's humiliated, he can't get it out of his head, blah, blah, blah.

It's time to wrap this up infact you could and should of ended it last chapter.

Bleep.

Judging from the comments I'm glad I don't read these.

Let the old fucked-up stories die.

I'll be short as I think njlauren said my thoughts well--- explain the third event with Dani and then forgive. Very believeable hurt feeling both side, bad reactions and both not on the same page at the same time. Nice touch bringing out the kids in this chapter. 5 stars

The steps he was taking to burn her, get a divorce, get custody of the kids, and keep his money, seems to have dissolved. He has had sex with her, tore up the contract (or at least she did), slept around as much as she did (there is even a video of him fucking Tina), gone on record with all her friends that he will try to save the marriage, etc. the only way this returns to a BTB story and makes the reconciliation haters happy, is for new developments. Only, these new developments need to be legally authentic if they are to be in keeping with the story. They are both lawyers. The story has already been premised on him carefully evaluating the contract and looking for legal lapses. Given the attention the author has placed on accuracy of details, if this is going to be a BTB story it has a ways to go. Reconciliation is the quickest out for this tale. Again, don't listen to the naysayers and rush this well developed tale. I love what you are doing. I look forward to seeing which direction you take it.

Some commenters seems to think that it is too long a story, I do not think so. After all the 'betrayal' from Danielle was among the worse that you can imagine, and the second and mainly third time add to it. So to 'solve' that issue it need time. Nonetheless I hope the author will wrap it all in a neat ending, probably with a reconciliation story, I would like that, but it's just my own taste.

The kids made reference to someone called John. We find out that John was Danielle's lover BEFORE Rick fucked the hooker. Therefore Danielle cheated FIRST. Hence contract is nullified and voided. Rick finds out that the 90/10 con game was Danielle and, Shelley's ultimate betrayal and divorces Danielle and wonders why he wasted time. Marrys Gina, gets the twins and starts a second family.

But you have lost the plot. Tedious repetitive, and boring. It was time to wrap this up two chapters ago.

how much of this bullshit must we endure. he is losing weight and fucking so many yet they both destroyed their marriage and his firm should know what is going on . make up or divorce both you cheating asses. she stopped but the punishment continues

this back and forth shit is boring both partiers are wrong his wife more so, either fix it or shit and get off the pot and move on. way to many friends fucking him to make this a believable story.

Your name is FinishTheDamnStory and you are incapable of doing it. How many fucking times must Shelly say "we made a huge mistake" - she has said it at least 20 times already. How many times will the pathetic Rick vacillate between his wife and divorce? This story stopped being interesting two chapters ago. Please, put it mercifully to sleep.

If FTDS really will FTDS. How many times can "I'm sorry", "I screwed up", "I made a big mistake." occur in this damn story? Take those out and this thing could have been wrapped up in Chapter 3.

So come on FTDS get on with it! Please try to FTDS in our lifetime!

Dr_Know

...that's been bugging me from the original story and the beginning of this one. NO contract is upholding in a court of law unless one of two factors persists. Money exchanged hands or the signing was notarized. Neither of these things happened in this. Any lawyer worth his fee would have just torn up the thing once he got his head out of his ass or used it as evidence of moral character in a divorce...

fat slob loses a few pounds an now he's fucking every women he knows...she hurt him bad but he did sign that fuckin contract..now he has hurt her badly too..is he going to fuck her mom too ?? if he can't get "those images" out of his head move on and stop the damage to her and himself..he is looking worse and worse to his law firm./and even after divorce he has young kids and will have to still have to deal w/ his ex for visitation,holidays,etc...she now has "images" in her head these two have gone too far to ever b ok w/ each other again....great story but too much detail on the sex he's having last chapt was a waste...please finish thanks !! stlcris

the last time (if ever) i've wanted three characters to just go die in a fire as much as these three sorry excuses for adult humans.

So far all we've heard is Rick's side of things...he's too small and can't compete with Meat and Danielle's wantoness for that kind of attention. Rick has pretty much made his decision ... I want to know what Danielle's decision will be and why. Does she continue as a size queen and suffer the consequences? If not, how does she convince Rick she is really back and erase those terrible wanton images of her lusting for her owner (Meat) from Rick's mind...can she? Great story but get it over with; soon. 5x5

I vote for our hero to live happily ever after with his trainer, cook and new law partner. Screw the yreacherous ex and her whorish friends!

Maybe it's just me, but anyone else think Tina's bruises are more likely from the sluts playing with abusive fuckbuddies rather than from a husband who is said to have had an affair by three woman who have done nothing but lie throughout the entire story?

... I used to wonder what you could do with an original story. Not so much, anymore. If this convoluted mess is any indication, it would probably be a disaster. Finish the damn story, already.

....of nasty women. Liars, cheaters, sluts and big cock hounds.

He calls Shelley 'smoking hot'? Any disease ridden cunt can still be 'smokin' hot'. The problem is, when they become slutty skanks, they no longer are 'smoking hot', they are slutty cunts.

And now after the way Tina treated him HE needs forgiveness? NO FUCKING WAY. She belittled him, humiliated him and made his life miserable. She deserves everything she got, with the exception of how her husband hit and bruised her, no women should ever be hit by a man except in self defense when pinned down. No woman deserves that.

Nope, Danielle is a big cock hound pure and simple and she took great pleasure in rubbing it in her husbands face. Never forget how she behaved, how she belittled her husband, how she was more passionate for other men that her husband even during 12 years of marriage and never forget how she made him eat it out that first time.

No, this woman treated someone that she supposedly loves worst than most any sane person would treat their worst enemy. That cannot be forgotten and most importantly, never ever forgiven.

No mention of teenagers in this one, despite Shelly's slip at the end of the last chapter, and Hubby REALLY should still have the PI following Wifey. This tale has more twists than a drunk snake. Wrap it up pretty quick, FTDS.

5 Stars, barely.

Chapters 2,3 and 4 of this story were excellent but 5 and 6 added nothing. Rick has gone from the clever and intelligent man of the earlier chapters who was able to piece together and see through his cheating wife's lies and bullshit and turn the tables off her contract to his advantage, into a bumbling buffoon, that even when such suspicious events like his untrustworthy wife working late, hanging out with her slut friends, Shelly's mention of teenagers on the phone, his children talking about their conversations with a man named John, are shoved in his face he still fails to wonder about or even consider them.

A major plothole is why on earth Rick would stop his PI's surveillance of Danielle when it's already provided him the details of her hiding and lying about fucking stud number 3 behind his back along with her conversations with her friends? Wasn't part of his counter plan against Danielle to deplete the bank accounts which 24/7 surveillance would help put a pretty big dent in?

Also his flip flopping between anger at what the 3 sluts put him through and him then wanting to make nice with them, day after day after day is just retarded. Nobody acts likes this or would even be able to, nevermind deal with all the stress it would cause them day in day out.

@ njlauren

You theory about Danielle going to to stud number 3 as self punishment just doesn't add up for me. IF, and its a fucking damm big IF, she only did it because she felt guilt over her actions of destroying her husband....

1) Why pick a stud with a huge dick? Shouldn't the punishment actually be a punishment so that an old fat sleazy guy would surely be required. A total sleazeball that offered her no pleasure at all and would humiliate her just like she did to hubby?

2)If it was truly a punishment for her behavior why wasn't if her instead of Shelly that put a stop to fucknuts insults of rick?

3)Most importantly, how does repeating the actions that have badly hurt her husbands ego and seriously fucked up their marriage, help her husband in any way which has to factor into her desire for punishment?

Why not hand Rick the key to his cock cage along with the keys to a chastity belt she would be wearing and giving him a free pass to fuck someone else and agree to both watch the video and clean him up afterwards? While not making things better it could be viewed as making things even and at least wouldn't make things worse.

You sure can't seem to finish the damn story. I started off giving you higher scores. With every additional episode, the scores get lower. Are you afraid you will die when it's over? Or are you just enjoying the guy's wet dream fantasy of having all of these women to fuck?

Come on. I'm way past giving a big rat's ass if you kill her, leave her or reconcile with her. If you're not careful, some mediocre writer is going to "finish the damn story" for you.

A 2 maybe..

I would say there is a lot of F...ing going on, but will use the word 'sex'. Sex sex sex sex among them all and all the time, get real !!!! Round and round we go. Get out the 45 and kill this "story". No other way to end it..........

FINISHTHEDANMSTORY

This has become a fantasy/nightmare. He has five women he can screw anytime and he's miserable? He has a promotion and a wife that will go along with him banging her friends and he's unhappy? He broached the third betrayal and the wife seemed to shrug it off with those words, "I'm sorry" for the one millionth time. You can keep this up forever. He's mad, she's sorry, then she's mad and he's sorry. I guess we stay the course until he loses all the weight he wants to lose. This story is better than the original, but so is diaper rash and NY Giant football. We've fallen down the rabbit hole here and I wonder if the author can get us out?

The marriage is over. There is no possible reconciliation possible. He's been taken to the brink and the wife and her friends are just placating him to try to save the marriage. I see it. If the deception works and they remain married it would be only a matter of time before Danielle and her friend search out big cocks. But now Rick realizes this also. Who is this John character? I have a feeling he is a secret lover but I can't be sure. Keep it coming.

and i now HOPE she leaves and finds someone else.

bill..................555555555555555555555555555555555555555

I do think that the kids had a great deal of information about everything going on between mom and dad. This could simply be the author trying to highlight the point that kids are more perceptive and thus more prone to being hurt than we think. This is supported in the text. It could also be that mom has been telling them things, or that this John is someone of import. Could just be a kid at school, or it may be some guy that mom has brought home before.

I was also surprised that he stopped having her followed.

My previous comment was not aimed at a specific commentator, just at all the comments in general - especially for the last chapter.

This is how things really are. One step forward, two steps back. The husband keeps turning things over in his head, putting the pieces together. The lies add up in new and different ways, after the fact. As much as he'd like for it all to work out, it becomes more and more difficult. One minute, reconciliation seems possible and the next, divorce seems inevitable. Great job.

this chapter did move the story forward. While I more than understand people's desire to see what happens (especially the BTB, throw the slut out anon posters who are waiting to rip FTDS a new asshole if they reconcile, their chief pleasure in life it looks like), I am just as anxious reading this, I think it is realistic in that complex situations are difficult to resolve, the three pagers where the guy says 'baby I forgive you", "I'll always love you" just doesn't work that way in real life. Hubby has been hurt, big time, it is a gaping wound, and has lashed out in anger and caused even more hurt, both to the other person and himself. What Shelly and Danielle and Tina can't realize is that anything they tell him about being a great lover is going to sound like they are telling it to him to make him feel better, to make up for what they did. Ironically, part of the cure for that would be pointing out that for some reason Jen and Gina, two attractive young women, seemed to find him great in bed....

The real breakthrough has to be Danielle explaining why she seemed so turned on in the videos and why she did it the third time and got so filthy and dirty. One explanation could very well be that she did it because she wanted to punish herself, that she was feeling like a low down slut, felt bad about herself, and wanted to degrade herself....in another story, GoodHusbands 'courtesan' series, the wife after they reconcile is feeling low about herself, and in a restaurant tells her hubby to go home and starts throwing herself at this arrogant jerk in a suit at the bar (yeah, I know, arrogant jerk and suit is saying the same thing), and he realizes why she is doing it and stops it, at a threat to himself.

The one weakness in the story is that both of them are professionals, they are lawyers, yet they aren't trying to rely on a professional to help them. Lawyers have a saying that someone defending themselves has a fool for a client, so why aren't they taking their own businesses advice to heart? Having people who were involved in the mess, like Shelly and Tina, only makes it worse. Danielle is going to have to come clean, and she could make the point that the first two times were out of anger and also in part to make herself feel desirable (he might feel self conscious about his dick size and lovemaking ability, she about her age, her body), and point out that he had two young women who were infatuated with him, and how did he think that made her feel, did he think she didn't know that a 20 something body and vagina is going to feel better than a mother of 2?

As far as the third time, She is going to need to convince him it was about abusing herself, punishing herself, and not about wanting to do it, and that is going to be hard. FTDS is a great writer, and he probably will come up with a way for hubby to realize that that wasn't about lust or desire, that not using a condom, all the holes, was her way of degrading herself, I just don't know how I would do that and make him believe it. It is where maybe a counselor would help, or maybe even Jean Morelli could help him understand that, if he specialty is bringing couples together, she might have insight as someone who has not stake in the race.

Great job, I give it a 5, both because it is a great story, and also because I need to balance out the Faux News crowd with their automatic 1 button for anything that isn't a man and wife having sex with the lights out in the missionary position.

The technical part of the writing is fine. No major errors. Good ole Rick needs to keep up the surveillance and grow a set of balls. Dump the bitch. The way you have written the story that is the only option. Scorched earth policy to her, her damn friends and her new lovers--yes, the way you have portrayed her and her friends I am sure there are more in the background. You have painted yourself into a corner here. The only option in the next installment is dump her, try to take the kids and move on, perhaps to another town even. Many of your endings to other's stories are good or at least aren't bad. This one is approaching bad. You can still fix it though if you get with the program. I suspect the way you have written this that all three of these women do hold Rick in contempt and that is the way you are going with this one but you need to get there NOW. End it. Take care of the children and let him move on to a happier life with a new love, one that respects him.

Our hero needs to find out who John is. I liked the line from one of the kids about you've almost lost one of me - that was funny.

I've read some chapter stories like this and, inevitably, several of the chapters become simply a rehash of previous work. It's too late for this one but perhaps in future efforts you can take time to read through an consider whether or not a section or chapter is truly necessary to get your point across. There was nothing in this chapter new. It simply showed me that this was a dysfunctional relationship before and now it's gone nuclear. He has some serious mental/emotional issues that he should really seek therapy over. They are not caused by the contract, but rather, were amplified by it. One question that keeps coming up as I read is that you seem to use the kids once in awhile but there are occasional episodes where they seem to completely disappear. Where were they during dinner and throughout most of the last part of this story. You are using them as a convenience but not taking into consideration that they are still a part of the world when not directly being related to. I'm sure this is done and you're simply posting. I had hoped that six was the magic number but apparently not, which was disappointing. It's become much too long. Too much of a good thing is still too much.

Penalty for repetition and not moving the plot forward.

I keep telling myself that I would do things differently if It was me , but the truth is that I really don't know what I would of done because it never happened to me that way . I do understand the trust thing is going to be really hard to get over if they ,and yes I say they, can . They both have that problem now . Rick because of what Dani has done and Dani because of what Rick has done . As of now Rick is no better than Dani . Dani is already making comments about Rick fucking her girlfriends and I'm just wondering if she will try to use that as a get out of jail free card in the near future if she wants to have fun with a big cock again or use it if they end up in divorce court .

Who is this John person and how does he fit into the picture , and how do the kids know so much about what is going on . I know kids know more about things now a days , but still they know way too many details . The fat comment that his kid made makes me wonder if mom has been trying to get the kids on her side in case things went south .

The teenager thing still has me stumped . Will we find out about that also or will it just disappear with no comment . Also Rick not keeping an eye on Dani any longer was a real shock to me . Rick has been doing everything to get back at Dani and has lost all his trust in her , but he stops having her followed ? You would think Rick would of had the PI on overtime following her since Dani started her new job and has been spending long hours at it , and her # 3 big cock conquest ? Anyway this is why there is writers and readers .We will never know why they write the things they write . We just read the stories and like them or not . As for me I only see one way for this to end and it is not a very happy way . To many things have happened and the trust is just not there any longer . I guess we will have to wait and see . Thanks

Who's John?

Some might argue, this is one of the weaker installments in this story. I can see where there some foundation for that concept. Rick didn't plow any new pussy this time out & recycled his increasingly wearisome " I'm so fragile " argument cc Danielle's deluded foray into foot-long dongs.

Yet the part of the story that struck me as platinum quality writing was Rick's heart to heart with his children. The wise yet innocent phrases emerging from the twins' lips struck so true.. To give full marks, a story has to have an isolated scene that will stay with me a long, long time. That talk so easily qualifies. Few authors dare to try this.

The reckoning scene with Tina, after he outed their liason to her husband, also took a unexpected poignant and mostly credible ( save for Tina not dialing 911 after hubby went Chris Brown on her ) twist. *****