All Comments on 'The Cuckquean'

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Bullrider14Bullrider146 months ago

Please proofread your work. Your autocorrect was substituting spend where I think you wanted the word sperm. Great story but those little errors take away from the flow and excitement

FencingbearFencingbear6 months ago

Well paced, well written, and just the right amount of lewd. Good work !

PappasleazePappasleaze5 months ago

It was a cuckquean story, but it left a lot to be desired for me in a story. 1 husband and 2 submissives. No story just sex scene after sex scene. I will give it 3 stars just because it is a sample of a cuckquean story.

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I write two types of stories. The ones I prefer all contain elements of actual experiences that I have had in my BDSM career. The others, are fap stories. Stories with little to no set up or substance. All negative feedback given anonymously will be immediately deleted. If ...

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