by Toyc319
Too many damn people involved and the mother wasn’t even a likable character so her being involved with the daughter too messed the story up even more. This story is like a party where you invite ten guests and 100 people show up. Too many damn people!
Wow! Please more!
Loved the Mommy dirty talk!
Loved the spanks, the humiliation and the cow talk!
You are a genius!
Well, brilliantly written. So hot, so erotic, so unique! Would love to have another chapter or two how the family dynamic is going to play out. Please!