by Lion24655
What an awesome story. Loved it loved it loved it. Please don't do a part 2 because it would just ruin it.
Out of the blue, mom suddenly blurts out that she's up for sex with her daughter and son-in-law? You might have introduced the suggestion in a way that wasn't so "out of left field". You could have built up to it a bit more, you know? Like, maybe they're on the couch, and cuddling a bit, and suddenly mom asks what's poking her in her side? Is that an erection? How naughty! Do I turn you on? That's kind of exciting...
Nice writing, but a minor "redux" followed by what happens next would be even better.
But, because it appears on the surface to be an abrupt ending and an out of the blue statement from MIL, doesn't necessarily make it so. Maybe wife and MIL have been talking behind his back, Maybe this is all part of a bigger plan on their part. It's all in how you tie it together.
If that's what the author has planned, good for him (or her). Something to explain the "spontaneous offer of sex" would be an interesting twist. Maybe mom has spoken to her daughter about being able to see what was going on, and if so, maybe that turned her daughter on even more. But as it stands with this one story, we just don't know. I would welcome a continuation (and an explanation) in the very near future.
Too bad we don't get see the bedroom. Clever, mean and bold action; had me on edge.
I have always liked the concept of someone viewing someone else accidentally (or so it seems) via a webcam or SKYPE. I have no problems with the ending. Yes, it was quick and didn't go into the threesome, but that is OK. I can use my imagination.