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Click here"You broke the rule. We're at three, not one."
"I take liberties," he said.
"Can you take more liberties with me?" I asked.
"No," he answered, his hand on my cheek. "I mean, you're great, but a lot of people are great... But, the next time you need your chimney cleaned, give us a call. They might send me," he said, bending down, rending me again with a kiss that was otherworldly.
After that, every time I was getting sexed out, I referred to it as "getting my chimney cleaned."
- COMMENTS
Anonymous3 months agoThe thing is all your stories are depressing, don't we all have enough depression already? You have a gift why wouldn't you use it to give hope, to make people smile and feeling like things can get better, of course is not your responsibility but why would you rather let people get depressed and hating your characters? Kinda disappointed...
readerfeederalmost 2 years agoI wish we could see more of the 'chimney cleaning' in this chapter, so to speak! Glad to see you back here and posting stories again - you're one of my favourite writers on Lit. Your stories tend to have a touch of melancholy and end on a slightly bittersweet note that I find quite rare in erotica. In my opinion, the fact that your stories are tinged with a sliver of sadness makes your writing more interesting. However, I can't fault the other commenters either - as readers, we're conditioned to expect happy endings or a sense of finality from the narratives we consume.
I'm curious, though - since this story is called 'The Dairy State Boy' I thought that Kevin might cross paths with Wyatt/Beef again in some form (not necessarily that they would be lovers again, but that he would find some kind of closure, perhaps).
I do feel there is more to Kevin's story, if you ever want to write more installments. Looking forward to your next writing project!
dnsontnalmost 2 years agoV got his groove back! Happy to hear he gets his chimney cleaned more now. I appreciate the story arc bending to this place. A lot of life left after 50.
