All Comments on 'The Dam Within'

master slave never works someone usually gets hurt or mad and ruins the relationship forever this belongs in the bdsm or fetish area not incest

nicely portrayed the amatuerish kinky foreplay.... liked it...

Once again your writing brought these characters to life for me, to the point I was suffering with her, hoping beyond hope he would allow her an orgasm ... DELIGHTFUL! Thank you Sir :)