All Comments on 'The Dance'

Love the way you use words, very descriptive...You show a reader, don't just tell them...and that's really hard to do well. Always a temptation to take the easy road and just tell them what to feel, rather then uses the words in the story to suggest a path. Wish I could do that when I write.

Really good read, very sensual and hungry. Thank You for the pleasure, and...more?