All Comments on 'The Dance'

i just wanted you to know that you did a good job on your story.i have a few my self, and i know how hard writing can be sometimes, but you did really good on it. hope to see more.

Too bad more first times are not like that. Would love to read more.

Good writing, but "Angel's" reactions and thoughts were too feminine for me.

A very good story. I wish it was longer.

I think it was fabulous! However it was a little rushed and next time you should use spellcheck. That being said please write more!

I say thank you for the beautiful way the author describes a first intiamacy. If only it had been this way my first time those many, many years ago.

a follow up would be nice. i love a good love story. they are few and far between on this crummy site