All Comments on 'The Dance Class Affair'

Fun story. Old gals can be great!

5

Well done. A guy once told me an old chicken makes good soup!

Clever, funny, deadpan, the height of the investigative trade. Sweet story.

I enjoyed this. It's witty and true to the genre.

Nice one Ronde, could picture it easily and thats would good writing does for the reader

Good stuff, that was funny!

Often as I read dialog I can 'hear' the voice of the person speaking. In this case my mind tried to hear Humphey Bogart's voice but the truth is I just couldn't imagine some of those words coming out of his mouth! Jack Nicholson (from Chinatown) was perfect fit, though.

Thanks for the entertaining read.

Sorry, didn't like it too much. I mean it's nice that MC got a got GF, but the cheating bastard wasn't burned at all.

Can't hide from me - LOL! Fun read - 4.7*

the neanderthal barrier hit way too hard in the opening paragraphs and I tuned out.

This one is well-written, witty, and just plain fun! I always love to see what kind of crazy characters you come up with, and these are some good ones. I think the “Neanderthal Barrier” was a good touch, as it let the reader know up front that this is a humorous story. I think I’m sharp enough to pick up that clue!

As always, thank you for writing and thank you for sharing your work.

A fun romp. Nice parody of the genre.

I recall that Richard Geer movie he made. This yarn would have made a better movie than that!

11 out of 10 and I'm a hard marker!