All Comments on 'The Dangers of Divorce'

Wow this story has a very dark ending. Not a happy one at all. I hope there is a second chapter that turns it around into a happy storyline. As right now that ended on quite the shocker!

How old was this baby when Mom took her? He just forgot about his kids. Didn't try to at least check up. Strange.

now we need to read the rest of this story and see what happens when the shit hits the fan.

she must have been very young not being able to know it was her father.

he did not know who is ex cheated with and married? A lot of holes

in your tale. she did not know her real name? she knew when she was asked

her real name. oh my, his name and her real name were the same.

Ops,,,the words "shit" and "fan" come quickly to mind.

Needed much more to this chapter, hope the next is longer with more information in it.

But the dialog is just not right