All Comments on 'The Dangers of False Advertising'

by Bob Waters

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zephyerzephyeralmost 3 years ago

We are ready when she is and I hope it is soon.

fishingrod48fishingrod48almost 7 years ago
Great Story well written

I love this story because it is so real

jenorma2012jenorma2012over 7 years ago
sorry

but when you force yourself on someone who is not ready then that is wrong

kellijane001kellijane001almost 9 years ago
Hot

Always wondered about this - had a few experiences. This was hot though.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Great story!

I love stories with this theme of someone finding something about themselve they never new existed!

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Too Boring

I don't like cliffhangers... Sucked in my opinion

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
i hope your still writing

this was an amazing opener. please continue the story. you wrote this years ago but its editors choice and well deserving of a continuation. i truly hope you will finish this wonderful tale.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Continue

I agree with the commenter above. Please, please, please continue this story. You've already left a great opening with the way this one ended. Billie has to take her new found lover home and make love to her properly.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Win!

This has always been a secret fantasy of mine, meeting with a stranger who knows how to get what she wants, like Billie. Needless to say, your story rocked my world! It was well written and I wasn't for a moment knocked out of it by a poorly worded sentence. Awesome!

topgyrlstopgyrlsover 17 years ago
good story that needs to be continued

Please continue this story! This is one of the best coming out stories I have read in a long time.

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