by RemiMarselis
I'm purely a spectator, but I appreciate your first contribution, especially in the demanding "Humor and Satire" field. Though it's not usually one of the categories I peruse, the title came up in a "Similar Stories" box and I followed the link. Seeing it was a first and recent entry, I gave it a try.
For whatever odd reason, the line that gave me the best chuckle was, "I've already forgotten our last conversation thread." I think it was due to its subtlety and the fact that I could visualize it, just like your description of the miscarried orgasm experience.
Overall, nicely done. Thanks again.