by Shaima32
One of your best, I loved it. As always I feel as though I'm right there living the story, you have such a clear way of writing and the narrative is brilliant.
I liked the Danish words and phrases, how you sprinkled them in with a translation or as part of a conversation so it was clear as to the meaning was clever , it added to the authenticity of the story.
Thank you
Jc
I kind of liked the way this story came together, but you do make a good point sex is not everything, you should get to know a person first before jumping into bed with them.
What an exciting couple talking about the drivel topics u gave them. An extremely boring story. Typical when people have political crap to, share amd then build a story around it.
Good grief! Aussies get everywhere. Well, you've pulled another joey out of the pouch, Shaima (or for those who don't speak Oz, another enjoyable Shaima story). My sole criticism is that I thought the names of the main characters were too similar (Anita and Anina). A few cans of Fosters and it would be easy to mix them up. A minor quibble only and it's still a five-star story.
and keep the Danish, especially the reference to Rita, the teacher everyone wishes they had and the the teacher all teachers wish they were (at least occasionally).
I really enjoyed it. Your characters were interesting and very real.
Keep up the good work. I like the “ordinaryness” (?) of the conversations, sort of real.
I enjoyed this story immensely, and am looking forward to your next one. Thank you for sharing these with us!
Your stories never disappoint! Love how you bring characters together from your other stories. Makes me go back and reread them. Love to see your name when looking at new postings. Hope to see more of these two.
SB
You tell us such wonderful stories and your characters are always interesting and expressive. I urge new readers to experience your 'best of the best' (in my opinion), "The American Reporter." I told you I love you because every tale you tell is very entertaining. And... I'm a guy,
Wow have missing ur stories so much I haven't read this yet but am sure it is as good as others
Its damn hard to stay open minded then being on a border line experience or falling into natural coma and coming back ..... Alien experience ..... Then live can become a fight but a true soul may can cure this missbalance ..... Great tale
I found you quite by accident, what drew me to the story was the fact you were quite willing to tell us all about Denmark and in particular Copenhagen. The use of a foreign language in writing a story should be second nature, and no reason to explain ones self.
An ex partner of mine spent time there and reading about that city and the country brought back so many wonderful memories.
I note with interest that most of your stories are about lesbian sex, which delights me. I will be reading more of your stories.
5 Stars from me.