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All Comments on 'The Dark Horde Pt. 01'

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ZZchromosomeZZchromosomeabout 5 years ago

Fascinating start. I like this premise of a long-forgotten gate between our world and a fantasy world.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Promising

An interesting start with a lot of promise. It was a bit short and was over quickly but you had a some really good content and it didn't seem rushed. I look forward to reading the next chapter.

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Just writing for the fun of it. * the Dark Horde series is over. It was started on a whim, and it finally came to a close, though I might re-visit it. It seems that there is a lot of possibilities there, with a lot more adventures. But it was written without a structure, an...

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