by jPhoenix
A story with a really interesting premise of what an AI can become.
I love this. Very much looking forward to the next chapter.
You're writing style is great, and you manage to create an image in my head with great ease.
this was a great first chapt ... hope to see more soon ... and if it stays this good it is going to turn out to be a great story :-)
Very well done. and it kept me on edge. at the same time not to trashy either. Very well done!! thank you so much for sharing.