All Comments on 'The Dark Run'

by jPhoenix

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jpz007ahrenjpz007ahrenover 10 years ago
xD

Great story. Love it when AI goes wrong. The places this could go xD

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Good story

A story with a really interesting premise of what an AI can become.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
part 2?

hope to see a part 2 in the future great read

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
great

I love this. Very much looking forward to the next chapter.

You're writing style is great, and you manage to create an image in my head with great ease.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
great start :-)

this was a great first chapt ... hope to see more soon ... and if it stays this good it is going to turn out to be a great story :-)

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Good read

Reminds me a bit of Scott Westerfeld's "Evolution's Darling."

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Nice!!

Very well done. and it kept me on edge. at the same time not to trashy either. Very well done!! thank you so much for sharing.

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