All Comments on 'The Dark Stone Pt. 01'

Don't leave us in suspence.

Great start to a very hot story . Like the stone idea . Can't wait to see where you take it . Thank you for the story .

Good start. I'll have to see how it goes to give you a more precise comment.

The idea is good and the chapter was exciting. However 2 pages is too short to get a good feel of a story like that.

Love it and please continue.

Fun story in general,definitely needs to be continued.

Best new story here in awhile. Keep it going!

Thanks for posting! Fun story so far, can't wait to see what happens next!

The reluctance is fun. Mom should be reluctant. makes it hotter

Fun story and a good read! Can't wait for more :)

Damn good hope u right more soon, but this has a more mind control feel to it unless its staying in the family

Lol, you ever read a story called “The black stone?”

I can’t wait for the next installment! Great job this is awesome!

You have a great start to a really good premise. This could be a fantastic story in the making. Keep going and I will look forward to reading more.

It was hot, have some expansion with the family members too. Love ya

Can't wait to read the next chapter or 3. Great story, perfect progression, can't wait to see how far down the submissive, kinky, uninhibited, hole the ladies go. Keep it up!!!

Please finish this, it's to good to miss out on.

Just to let you all know. Part 2 is submitted and pending. Part 3 is written and I'm editing now. I'm really happy with how the story develops. Enjoy.

Please it was really good , need more!

really love the set up and glad it will have 3...but how long is it gonna be pending for?

I love incest and mind control stories! Five stars!

Love that Mom was first. I was surprised that his sis was such a bitch. I'm sure she had not seen a cock that big unless she was a virgin or had not experience.

Looking forward to chapter 2

I really like the story, hope that the rest of the chapters are this good!

New chapters are on the way to literotica. There's also a new story that should drop here any day now.

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Thanks!

I love the way you jumped right into the power without a big set-up. The pace of the story is excellent.

Wow, this chapter is basically the same as yr last two stories.

I love this story kg

Not a fan of stories that cuckold the father… 1*

How old is the Mc supposed to be? Idk any 18yr Olds that bounce and skip. Super guy bro.

GREAT STORY...NICE SLOW START TO WHAT APPEARS MIGHT BE EXCELLENT...MOM & SISTER BOTH 'LILE' THE ROCK...LUCKY YOUNG MAN!

You are really taking your time with this, looking forward to the rest of the series, now...see who else gets to feel the effects of the rock!!

**5** stars!!

Another one of the stories in this universe should have the dark stone dropped by a train passenger for Sam to find on the tracks that fateful day.

This is a great setup for the rest of the story. Looking forward to more family adventures.

Outstanding