All Comments on 'The Darkness Revealed'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
...YES !! READY FOR THE FUTURE !!!,,,,,,,,,

,,,,,,Rick has obviously "set the stage" for the romantic cruise (she thinks)..Please write some stories,,,after boarding, she discovers that she is the poolside erotic masseuse and it is an African nudist cruise..she is popular and averages 18 half hour "sessions" per day and she is live on the internet 24/7 and is on all 800 screens on the ship..the huge basketball players keep her busy and the casino has betting going on her "sessions" number of orgasms etc...Looking forward to your "massage" stories..many thanks ,,,:::::,,,/////////:::::::::::::

cyberlarkcyberlarkabout 13 years ago
You got it.

You hit the nail on the head with this story. You not only captured the rawness of emotions, the intensity of the event, but also the thoughts that go through the heads of those of us who realize our need to submit and be taken and the confusion of the partner in all of this. I'm not sure if this was a personal experience of yours and that is how you were able to write this so beautifully... None the less it was quite cathartic for me. Thank you for writing this. Please do continue to follow and explore this path.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

My boyfriend fucked me silly and sucked my nipples all the time while fucking.

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