All Comments on 'The Day After'

Bahhumbug

DARREN'S awakening.

Loved it.

this story has in it what a good valentine story should have in it

a great message in this story and i loved it very much

the pace was good.

i hope you will post more stories

thanks for this short, cute quickie.

I tell my wife that I love her everyday. Still it was a charming tale beautifully told. Even this unromantic old fart could sympathise with the way Joanne felt at work. how fortunate she was to have a friend like Laura. Darren is a lucky man.

loved it. Darren is right though. A year of showing someone how much you love them is much more important than a one day demonstration. my wife has had the same problem with her long time husband. often i forget or ignore ceremonial dates. they are one day events. showing her love throught the year is more important. THANK YOU

Loved it!