All Comments on 'The Day Daddy Made Me His Ch. 02'

That was good! Like really, really good. Can't wait for #3.

Even a trashy story deserves to be written properly. This one certainly qualifies as trash and, to top it off, it is not properly written. Suggest the writer learn proper grammar prior to making an attempt at the third chapter.

Chapter 3 is already written, but please explain how this is "trash". Also, my grammar may not be perfect, but no body's is and I've seen a hell of a lot worse grammar than mine.

Great story! Keep going! MORE!!

Thank you! I'll be writing 4 tonight and tomorrow should so it should be up right after 3 (:

This was fine! I liked it! I would just like to see more details included... I'm looking forward to #3!

I'm not discouraged by them in any means, I just like all feed back. Number three has more detail as well. But I'm glad you liked it and three should be up tomorrow, just letting you know though it's not really erotic, it follows the story line.

Great build off of ch 1 Miriah

Looking forward to ch 3.

Keep up the good work.

Thank you so much (: I'm glad you liked it and want to read part 3, (it's not very erotic, just follows the story line) But it should post in about 20 minutes (:

Part 3 is now up. (: