All Comments on 'The Day Everything Changed Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Very good. Definitely need a following I'm confindent you're going to provide (soon I hope) as it is named "ch01"

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Very nice indeed!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Very good. Please continue.

lightninlightninabout 2 years ago

A good and interesting start, hopefully you will write more.

raja_mraja_mabout 2 years ago

a great start. eager to see where it goes in the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

That was wonderful. You write so well. I’m bi also and I’m hoping there is some bi action with the guys :)

danno174danno174about 2 years ago

Fantastic writing style, please continue the story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Lovely to see a exhibitionist story in a Bengali setting. Would love to see what দোয়েল gets up to in subsequent stories.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

This is fairly detailed and quite enticing! Please continue this series!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Lovely.. Looking forward to next.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

" I hope to publish subsequent parts at regular intervals, depending on how well this part is received "

I think this story was very well recieved. When do we get the next part??

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Fantastic story.. so well written.. please keep writing :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Fantastic story start. Hope you take it to another level

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

The best story I've read so far in this site. Carry on.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

This was amazing!

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Hi, I am a fun loving girl from India. I enjoy being with both men and women, and am an exhibitionist by nature. It seldom bothers me when I hear crass comments about my character, as I love enjoying life as I go. I also like reading, movies and music. I have been swimming for...

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