All Comments on 'The Day I Cheated My Husband'

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digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichalmost 15 years ago
That's really erotic, the 4 of them fucking

It would create a special affair with both of the husbands fucking the women. The sights and smells of the other couple would make the couple watching very hot and want to fuck. Thanks for the story........Rich

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
PLEASE

PLEASE GIVE YOUR SELF THE NEEDLE

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Pathetic attempt at writing.

Pathetic story. I couldn't care less who fucks who or why, how and when. If this is a true story then I pity you and your pathetic husband. And your friends as well.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Take a glass of water

And drown yourself into it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
This so poor

sorry i cannot give you a lower % than zero

mjar65mjar65almost 15 years ago
enjoyed it a lot

this is a good start and I hope you will write more ...really cool that you shared this with us and after more practice it will get even better ...don't rush the story next time, take time and let us know more of the details :-)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
keep writing and forget about the critics

Sure it needs some editing but it's your first try. Keep writting and find a friendly editor to help you put it together. Dont' worry about the snobs tht only criticize. None of themeven attempt to write. I lived in Manila for a while and know tagalag so I'm glad you wrote in English. Keep writing. Write for your own enjoyment and then share with us.

tazz317tazz317over 12 years ago
RED ROVER RED ROVER

send the other wife right over. TK U MLJ LV NV

betrayedbylovebetrayedbyloveover 11 years ago
Bullshit

You should have wrote in your native language. It might have been better since no one could read this crappy tale.

HA

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
But it does matter.

Especially in medical terms. If your child has a medical emergency he or she may need blood or a transplant and if the child isn't yours your donation could prove fatal.

Plus which, if they're sharing with you, they're probably sharing with others. Who knows what little disease you might pick up. And try and get some self respect. Try honoring your wedding vows. Weak morals like yours spill over into other parts of your lives and make you bad people, not fit to be parents. This was bad even for a fictional tale.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
annony calling the writer out for having no talent. At least this person wrote a story

you can't even spell you own name. So fuck off annony you dog shit dim wit! I gave this a 5

NexttimeroundNexttimeroundabout 8 years ago
Actually

I liked this as it ended up happily with all consenting and understanding and enjoying what they had. Quite lucky, it could have been a disaster. And it was well enough written too with dialogue between the parties which I always like.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
I take it your daughter was there to for a DP

I bet your going to do San daughter in front of wives?

26thNC26thNCalmost 4 years ago

How low can they go? Apparently if you're an Indian, pretty damn low.

RanDog025RanDog025over 3 years ago
NO STARS!

NOT EVEN ONE!

Rancher46Rancher46over 2 years ago

Bad storyline, no plot. no stars

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Wow that's great want something like that ... But guess it's hard to find ...

Tark308Tark3086 months ago

What a fantastic couple ×2. So cool and hot. I wish she didn't cheat and just asked hubby what she wanted and most likely hubby would have agreed. But in the end it was good.

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