All Comments on 'The Day I Met the Football Team'

Haha, no, but seriously.... Good work, I loved it.

Instead of all those unknown cocks slippin in & out of her holes, it would be nice to have a bit more detail. She now is lovin it, so she needs to get vocal.

I like the "Momma" in the background directing things. Need to know what she is thinking while watching & directing this Bang. Is Momma getin fucked too? That would be a nice little trip. Momma gets fucked while directing Jake to fuck her, She needs to be fucked where she can see Momma getting a big one slammed into her Hot, Wet, Steaming cunt, as Momma humps back on a big rod.

Opps this is your story, sorry.

I want to meet the team, asummimg they could keep it secret. Mmmmmmmm

Slightly amusingly written...slightly tongue in cheek...but sexy nevertheless. Very British humour...thankyou...

Good stuff!

Sorry guys, my first story! I'm hoping to write another one soon, just trying to pick up some writing tips xx

I could do without the hitting. I don’t think punching women is ever sexy, unless it is agreed on beforehand and consensual.

Surely there are follow ups!?