All Comments on 'The Day Our Lives Started'

I love it to me it was a good read told a wonderful story, hope to see more. Thanks

I have found this old story and I was happy to read. Is a lovely one, with a tragedy end, but in hopeful love with the siblings.

Great Job!

Story needs a little more development, and, for God's sake, USE GRAMMAR CHECK! Know the difference between "your" [possessive pronoun] and "you're" [the contraction of (you + are)].

A beautiful loving story. Please continue and go into more detail of what they do with each other.

Love the story. AAAAAA++++++

Great story and pretty well told. But as another Anonymous below says, learn the difference between 'your' and 'you're,' otherwise the grammar nazi fairy will get you! LOL. But most of all, keep writing!

Lovely story, it really drew me in and so nicely written, . . . . . , but!!! "Oh God. Your Gorgeous. Your Lovely. Your Fantastic!!!" As another grammar nazi, I have to ask, please learn the difference between "your," and "you're." "Your," is a pronoun, I think a possessive pronoun, your hat, your book, whereas. "you're," is a contraction of "you are," which is what you should have used.