All Comments on 'The Deal Ch. 15'

When I saw how short this was I submitted chapter 16 as well it should be up in a day or two for more

I don't know how you do it but this a really good series and I am so enjoying the read.

I waited almost week for 1 page.

LOL JK. Still good not sure I will read this one 3 times but will definitely watch for more chapters to post.

Still an amazing story.

Hey Turtle1952:

Thanks! I always appreciate your comments. I very much enjoy these characters and that leads itself to the situations.

Glad you are enjoying it!

Hey - I am sorry. When I was reviewing it this past weekend I realized it was very short. I'm kind of surprised the first time around years ago that I didn't get any well-deserved grief about it. To make up for that, I submitted both chapter 15 and 16 together hoping they would appear at the same time. So much for that idea.

Still, very glad you enjoyed it but do keep an eye out for chapter 16 in which Diana goes a little wild (and I did get some grief the first time around for that!)

well done litfan you have steered the story extremely well. Ive loved every chapter of this series and my only wish is that it never ends. Another five star for this chapter and looking forward to more.

A short chapter, but good stuff. I like that this story is not rushed, but not boring either. Just enough action to keep it interesting.

Cindy being totally nude and saying she is unsure about fucking her boyfriend....A little much. If you run around naked and do not have the urges...come on

How could she not at least want him to masturbate her or her to suck his cock.

I still enjoy the story

Marvelous erotic, well-written series. All characters have been well developed (personally and emotionally). Plot is realistic and plausible. Series remains 5 stars.

Another great story. Thanks for making it so detailed and have so many chapters. Great job!