All Comments on 'The Deal Ch. 21'

In truth awesome dosn't even come close to describing this chapter and the story in general. Another great addition to your continued story. Keep them coming..... pleeeeeease!

why did Cindy start swinging to I personally would have liked if she would only do matt and di but hey only my opinion. But awesome story cant wait where this is going

as you know i love every chapter you post and i also love the way you respond to everyones comments however this is the first chapter you have written that im not going to give a 5, i really want Cindy to stay with Matt only and not become a sex whore. plz consider this

I'm with everyone else. The other people are mucking things up.

I want Cindy and Diana to lock in this relationship with Matt. Cindy is really sweet and innocent (Even with all she has done lately) and she really needs to just be with Matt and Diana and NOT go down this road.

Why turn Cindy into a shut when she hasn't even fucked Matt

Unlike others I love how Cindy has grown into a little sexpot, I hope she goes further with the other guys as it can let us see how Matt handles the jealousy plus it would all get a bit boring if her Matt and di all lock in the rship now, so good work so far let's see Cindy go even further next time

I, unlike others have no problems with the plot progression, and Cindy"s blossoming interest in sex.

This story has been developing with interest in all the various possibilities that are now starting to present themselves.

No one has, or would complain when a male character suddenly goes for every sexual opportunity. But everyone feels that a "virginal" young woman cannot have a full sexual awakening, and explore all her desires like a kid in candy shop. She is developing, discovering, and exploring in ways many of us dream about.

Don't cast your insecurities on story that is still being told.

Litfan has already explained that the whole story is pretty much written already. Just enjoy it for what it is, and wait for events to unfold.

Thank you for what I have read, and look forward to reading.

However, as one person said...Why is Cindy being such a MAJOR SLUT when she is still a virgin?

My only complaint is she will EAT OUT her Mother-in-law's to be ass but won't fuck her boy friend? I do not think that is reasonable. Yes she is sucking his cock, bit please.FUCK THE POOR BOY

and group videos don't belong in this storyline.

Mature, sexual adults doing what they want within their own individual limits. The only cur in this entire series is the former uptight biology teacher.