All Comments on 'The Deal Pt. 02'
by emelle78
- 41 Comments
mattenwabout 3 years agoYou should call your story "the whore and the fagot"! Anyone who has such a slut as a wife no longer needs enemies! She's a manipulative whore who just wants to fuck other cocks and he's a gay idiot! What is supposed to be exciting or sexy about this story? A quick divorce is the best solution!
Anonymousabout 3 years agoThis was so hot! I love stories where the couple fuck other people but still love each other the most. Especially when the husband either crossdresses or does gay stuff. 5 stars, hope there’s more in store for these two
Anonymousabout 3 years agoAn excellent second chapter. You wrote it realistically since if that was the first time any couple went through with something like that, I would be wondering how things stood after waking up after a drunk night of sexual escapades such as this. I was thrilled that Freddy was alright with everything as I think many guys would wonder if their partner thought less of them. Another wonderful five star posting Em. I hope you continue with your exceptional writing as I always enjoy your work.
J.D.
A_Sissy_Named_Trishalmost 3 years agoChapter 2 has really pushed things to the point where Freddie needs to be fucked in front of his lovely wife....better yet she should be ridding Freddie while the Alpha Male is taking Freddie's Boipussy,,...now that would be so naughty,,,,,
Thegentlesoldierover 2 years agoGreat story, especially when they talked about it. Intimate. Wonder what Jake and Cal bought Freddi from Walmart?
cdCindy1over 2 years agoGreat 2nd chapter. This was fantastic, especially since Freddie got to watch his wife take cock in all 3 of her holes. I would love to watch my wife do this. Hopefully one day that will cum true.
Keep up the great writing. Looking forward to more of your stories.
Anonymousabout 2 years agoIt took some time but I was excited to see chapter 2. It was good to see how things worked out and allowed the reader to get some closure. It showed that things can work out after experiencing a night like that with your SO and even grow to a better place than you were before. As the saying goes “Actions speak louder than words” and in some cases, it is more difficult to bring up or discuss some things until after you found an answer. Another five star winner of a story.
Anonymousabout 2 years agoLoved it my wife is always wanting to role play sexy things like this maybe I will let her use me like a woman to share with her friends. She has lots of male friends from her old school she goes out with once a month. Maybe she can make me a pretty woman like her. I will not need a wig I have long hair and not much body hair. Should be fun, I hope. Time will tell.
vindalowdabout 2 years agoGave it five stars. Would have given it one if Carolyn didn't keep her end of the original bargain.
ShelbyDawn57about 2 years agoA story like this could have gone so bad so fast.
Love that Carolyn kept her end of the deal. I am kind of wondering how Jack and Cal celebrated after their team won the game, though...
Maybe a chapter three...
Anonymousalmost 2 years agoI want to fuck Ferddi in my thong and bra and suck him in a 69 while both bein fucked
BrendaNWalmost 2 years agoThis was such a fun and sexy story, people living the day and enjoying themselves .. a other chapter would be appreciated, but the storyline would stand as it is. Thanks, Tiffany
Matureandkinkyalmost 2 years agoemelle78, your stories encapsulate just about EVERYTHING I love about pure unadulterated kink !!!
Since I see no new 2022 stories, I can only hope you are recharging your literary batteries prior to another upcoming mind blowing series 🤞🤞🤞.
loveevolover 1 year agoThis was just wonderfully, wonderful, story, it has most aspects of sexual fantasies, plus love wiped in just beautifully, thank-you for this break of hating couples there are parts of that I also like but this is a nice change
Sissyjackie2008over 1 year agoThis is an amazing story. It is wonderful that Carolyn anticipated Freddi's gay needs and let him realize them, while Freddi let Carolyn have torrid sex that he could not provide. They are a wonderful and loving couple.
Anonymousover 1 year agoI call bullshit. You turned some innocent crossdressing into a gay/slut fuckfest. Doesn't belong in the transgender/crossdressing category. Belongs in the Non-con section. I didn't believe for a minute that he would have left the house dressed as a woman. Simply awful writing.
OnlyInMyMind10 months agoI know this was a fantasy but at every turn Carolyn deceived him. She promised a girls night out but set him up and abandoned him on the dance floor, let another man finger her without her husband's consent, then let them fuck her in front of her husband, knowing he dare not object, then let one guy analy rape her hubby. What a bitch. I wonder what it would have taken for her to call it all off.
This was non-consent.
Anonymous8 months agoMy wife has told me many times how hot it would be to see me service a man. I think this story I’d hownour experience would play out.
LisaBrooks7 months agoI need a wife named Carolyn! Make a DEAL then help getting dressed as a woman finding two young men at a club that would change their world! What a gal and she had many surprises from Freddy! I loved the sucking of cocks and all the sex that goes with it!
