All Comments on 'The Demolition Man'

🤣🤣🤣 your imagination leads to believe that if you hadn't taken up writing, you may have had serious legal problems. Thank you. I absolutely loved this. S. F.

Verry funny loved it more please

Damn, too bloody funny!

Great Story!! Loved It!!

I think this is the first story on this site that I laughed through! More please, real life is so boring!

Thank you. This was brilliant. It’s easy to write something funny, but to write something so funny so vividly takes skill. In my mind’s eye I saw the dwarf, in costume, delivering his message and could hear the congregations gasps and groans. So well done. 5🤟

Too funny! Easy 5*

Absolutely hilarious!! Everyone needs a great friend like John!! Very entertaining. Thanks!! 5 big stars!! Keep them coming!!

That was hilarious. Best laugh id had in ages

“ hail to the king baby”

priceless

Great story, really made me laugh

It was all so believable until you had the dwarf dress like Elvis!

Love a little humor in an LW story.

@Captpatrick

no!

that's what makes it real!

10 stars and bookmarked!

Hilarious!

Hilarious!

A true friend is someone who acts to take your mind off your own misery.

Oh dear god, that was funny. You have a gift my friend!

Hail to the king Baby..... perfect.

God damned lack of proof reading. How the hell do you forget the protagonist sold the wedding dress and then write John sold it.

Second read and just as funny as first time.

Vraiment génial. Je suis mort de rire. Histoire bien ficelée.

Fucking hilarious.

@AngelRider

Oh my God... that's what you focused on?

Comments like that make me wonder how people manage to get through the day alive.

The story was fiction, dude. A funny romp. If there's an error... God... get your money back.

Damn that was funny. Hail to the king baby made me laugh out loud. Luckily I just finished eating something so didn't choke or spit it out.

Wow - loved it - I was laughing sooo much I was almost pudding myself

AWESOME. but did i miss the C4 explosion

I loved it. Funny and well written 5 STARS

My stomach hurts from laughing. Great Job!

Funny BTB action. Her boytoy turned out to be a pussy.

Hilarious take on the BTB concept.

LOL !!!! Awesome. perhaps the best was the midget Elvis in Jenna's church.

Man, are you ever good. Loved it.

That was one great tale. I almost choked on a grape at the ‘four foot dwarf dressed as Elvis’ talking to Jenna about how they put that big strap-on in Tim’s hiney. I gotta say, that John is a heck of a demolition man. That composition C4 ain’t got shit on John. It just makes one big boom, but John just keeps on going. He’s like the Never-reddy bunny.

Like I said, great story, Aesop. Certainly good enough for 5 stars, 10 if I could figure out how to do it.

5 stars.

⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

One of the funniest stories I have read on the site. 5*

Hail to the King, baby!

The Elvis had me on the floor rolling.... Thanks for the great laugh...

Now that's funny....

Hilarious. A classic that I enjoy every time I read it. 5* Looking forward to your next post.

Fucking hilarious. I will aspire to be John.

OMG!!!! Ridiculously fun!!! Had me literally LOL!!! Undoubtably the funniest LW tale I've ever read!!! Thanks for a delightfully fun read!!! I've read several very funny LW tales but this has been the very best by a long shot!! Great job!!! Thank you!!!

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I love it!

Best-Aesop’s-Fable—-EVER! Yeah, old Aesop was probably rolling over in his grave while I was laughing my ass off. Much thanks to the author for making my day with this one.

5 stars, without a doubt.

Fn a top story

Great laugh again.

good lord, best, revenge ever. The midget elvis proposing to her in church while humiliating her... perfect.

Great story lots of laughs.

Not every Loving Wives story is funny, but this one certainly is. Thanks for the humor -- oh happy days!

Ed

LOL I loved this story and gave it 5 stars, very funny revenge.

There really isn’t enough LW comedies but this makes up for a lot.

Hilarious. Well done, worth 10 stars

I would love to have a sit down conversation with the author. Very creative person. Thank you for sharing your warped personality with us. I noticed the author hasn't written in over 3 years. I hope that changes soon.

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OG46

Don't know if it's good or bad. But, knew/associated with several guys like this in the military. But, then again all of us were a little bit off.

I'm fucking cry-laughing at this.

OFS!

Much better than most of your fables. Hilarious and I need a buddy like John.

Awesome LOL

Muahaha!! Loved it .